Vista of Moonlit Night

January 3, 2013
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After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."

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sassygurl said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 12:38 am
i love it!! it is achingly sweet...
Fallenoutofgrace said...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 3:04 pm
this is really good i like your word choice
IrenieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 4:43 am
This is beautiful. Wonderful imagry. Very evocative. Keep writing :)
EMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 4:41 am
This is absolutely lovely! It has a great vocabulary and wow! It is just beautiful!  
Zee.100 said...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 7:08 am
Wow, thats really observant.
DoubttheCircles said...
Mar. 20, 2013 at 12:02 pm
I love it! It really captures the peace and beauty of the night. The way you use your wording is extrordinary and powerful. Definitly a favorite (:
necci said...
Mar. 20, 2013 at 11:59 am
very clear and goooved loved it 
LariElaine said...
Mar. 19, 2013 at 1:15 pm
i love the the words, and the images the words explain, good job!
RagwaFouda said...
Mar. 19, 2013 at 11:23 am
Loved It !!!!!
monkeymorgan said...
Mar. 17, 2013 at 2:17 pm
Very nice. I love the way you described the scenery. your use of diction was amazing very very good job.
Alisaluvzyou said...
Mar. 17, 2013 at 10:42 am
This is really cute and good
Hammad Khan said...
Mar. 16, 2013 at 2:04 pm
Nice one Hamza ..... 
mary_blue356 said...
Feb. 24, 2013 at 6:10 am
My favorite poem of yours! I felt like under the spell of the moonlit night! 
NoeMimi1206 said...
Feb. 22, 2013 at 2:25 pm
i've always loved your poems!
Sabeen_Yameen said...
Feb. 19, 2013 at 5:23 am
nice one :) the way u use your words is brilliant...
Hamzawaseem replied...
Mar. 19, 2013 at 12:15 pm
thanks sis
GLoveGG said...
Feb. 18, 2013 at 12:23 pm
I think so far, this is my favorite. Its a beautiful reflection of a moonlit night. :)  
Marrabelle said...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 10:53 pm
this poem has grasped both my heart and soul. it amazes me that someone could make simple words sound so beautiful. :) 
Zeesquare said...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 4:38 pm
SuNshiNe007 said...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 3:12 pm
Amazing Ham!! I absolutely LOVE this poem so perfectly made and scripted. I would love to read more. This is beautiful! :)
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