Love Song

April 28, 2012
By kokojanelle4 BRONZE, Johnstown, Colorado
kokojanelle4 BRONZE, Johnstown, Colorado
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Love is like a song escaping my mind
A haunting melody playing like background noise
I know the lyrics they’re just hard to find
A child looking for forgotten toys
The melody plays like it’s trying to tease
A voice saying that I could have it all
Then it pushes me to my knees
And I’m left staring up at a blank wall
The answers are never quite what they seem
They’re always here but never something I’ve had
Making this experience like a dream
That I can’t wake up from and is both good and bad
It will play on till the words come to me
Finding that in love is something I can’t be

The author's comments:
I feel like everyone is falling in love and I just don't feel it. People come to me for relationship advice and I've never even been in a truly successful relationship.

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on May. 3 2012 at 5:55 pm
pianokeysevie SILVER, Clinton, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Aut viam inveniam aut faciam

good job with the sonnet form.. this is really good:)

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on May. 2 2012 at 8:42 pm
gingy PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Embrace your inner nerd!

Beautiful! So many people have trouble sticking to the format of the sonnet these days which is a shame because when done well, sonnets speak volumes! Great craftsmanship! Keep Writing!

on May. 2 2012 at 10:30 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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I love this! You are really good. Keep it up :)

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