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Finally Found Love

March 20, 2012
By elizabeth soto BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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My craving for his sight is like no other
Air is not wanted,not necessary
Your advice is just a lingering bother
My heartbeat stops , it's just temporary
Thinking back,life is like an empty soul
Until you find your other half,your perfect match
As he strolls by his glance takes a toll
It's as if my body and heart detach
My wish? He is my only true desire
I think i finally found my other half
It's just an electric shock a wrong wire
A genuine person a joyful laugh
His smile brings joy just like a morning dove
There's nothing more important than his love

The author's comments:
This piece is inspired by that so called "feeling" you get when you fall in love. I hope that everyone can relate to it in some way or another. Sooner or later.
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