All I Have Is Just One Tear

February 16, 2012
from a place I didn't know
existed inside of me,
came a pain that hit me low,
made me scream in agony

weak, still clawing my way out
of this deep, bottomless pit
suffocated by my doubt
lost, at the end of my wit

the pain, it tore me apart
gleefully shredding within
destroying my helpless heart
to describe it I can't begin

put my fingers to my face
and feel the tear out of place

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SuNshiNe007 said...
Mar. 7, 2012 at 7:49 am
Wow, this is so sad..Its amazing! I love the wording you used. And I know how you feel I've been through this before, and to this day I still have not cried a tear. It's hard to move on too because I still really haven't. Deep down inside I know this, but I can never tell him. But hey everything is going to be okay. Great Job by the way! Hope to read more
JerseyGirl716 said...
Mar. 3, 2012 at 10:04 am
Poems this personal are hard to write, but you did an amazing job. I love the structure! 5/5 :)
LilZo11 replied...
Mar. 14, 2012 at 2:53 pm
thank you, and SuNshiNe007, i am sorry you had to go through the same thing, it really stinks doesn't it? ha, and yeah its legit i.m.p.o.s.s.i.b.l.e to move on, i may think i have but now and then i catch myself thinking of him and i struggle in making myself not look for his face in the halls at school haha
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 7:41 am
Yea it does stink..haha..I catch myself doing the same thing too. And when I start looking for him I close my eyes and open them again, and when I run into him I almost freeze..
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