i see you MAG

January 9, 2012
By josephinelouise BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
josephinelouise BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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Baby girl, remember that when you think
you are invisible you are wholly
visible to me. No teacher, no shrink
knows you loves you watches you so slowly
and attentively as I do. So
when you look to your window and begin
to doubt your place in our world, please
just know
you matter, and then turn to search within.
Chances are, I'll lose my sight before you
start to lose your might, but when
you're blind
to heart and mind, look after you, I'll do;
I'll close my eyes and see for you: behind
above below inside around. No cost,
baby girl; when you're loved, sight can't
be lost.


The author's comments:
For my mama, who sees me when I'm blind.

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on Aug. 5 2014 at 2:31 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

WoW this is such a beautiful poem ^_^ So emotional and full of love and carring. You have the skill to creat pictures so we can all see and feel what you're feeling. So you certainly should keep writing. Thank you for sharing this :D

on Jun. 25 2013 at 2:46 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I love it~ no one knows you better than your mother. Beautifully written~

on Apr. 6 2012 at 11:58 am
wonderful! absolutely wonderful!

BethanyR said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 8:00 pm
Beautiful! The syntax is concise and I like the sentences flow from line to line. Great use of rhyme. Congrats on your first sonnet!




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