The Break-up Sonnet

January 9, 2012
My love, my friend, in good hope I tell you
I have found a man to talk with at night
I say this to keep you from turning blue,
Save you from sorrows, to stop a sure fight.
I don’t mean to brag, but he is a god.
His eyes of the sea, with love they do swirl.
His voice of an angel makes yours seem odd.
His structure makes you seem like a small girl.
His lips touch mine with a small, gentle kiss.
While your lips are dry or covered in drool.
That’s only one thing that I will not miss.
If I stayed with you, I’d be called a fool.
But don’t be discouraged by my speech,
Maybe you’ll find a blind wealth-sucking leech.

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ShadowOfMyLife said...
Jan. 19, 2012 at 10:22 am
This is so well written and very true. BTW not to be creepy or anything but I was looking at your profile and we could like be twins! Buffy, Doctor Who, Sherlock Holmes, Panic! At the disco, torchwood! YOU ARE MY NEW FAVOURITE PERSON.
LaurenElizabethVicki replied...
Jan. 19, 2012 at 12:47 pm
Oh my god! That's awesome! I don't meet a lot of people who like all that stuff too! Not even my friends like all that stuff! AH! I'm super excited to find someone like me!
ShadowOfMyLife replied...
Jan. 19, 2012 at 6:14 pm
Oh and I forgot to say Bones also. lol anyway I think all your work is amazing! Keep writing!
LaurenElizabethVicki replied...
Jan. 19, 2012 at 8:32 pm
Thank you! You're compliments are very appriciated!
barbie.girl83 said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 5:35 pm
i really like this *snaps*
LaurenElizabethVicki replied...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 5:18 pm
Thanks! That means a lot!
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