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Dear friend do not leaveth me
For I truly beg thee to stay,
You bringeth my soul warmth.
Warmth, that not even my loved ones can provide.

Dear friend do not leaveth me
For I truly beg thee to stay.
You bring joy and beauty to the fields,
Joy and beauty that no other thing can possibly provide.

Dear friend do not leaveth me
For I truly beg thee to stay.
Stay by my side, where you belong.
For dear summer, you are truly a friend like no other.




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ArtemisiaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 2:12 pm:
I love the Old English flair to this piece. It's so relatable, too. Nice job! :)
 
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Pitiful_Anonymous said...
Jun. 1, 2012 at 9:36 am:
This is a very beautiful, and joyfully descriptive poem... Pretty much the exact opposite of what I write haha but it's very good. You paint the picture of summer time very vividly through your word choice.
 
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xMusicallyAd3ptx said...
May 29, 2012 at 7:06 pm:
Very nicely done. The use of archaic language may not appeal to all, but I sincerely enjoyed it.
 
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AsIAmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 2:38 pm:
I thought this was good, but it could have been a little more powerful. :)
 
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