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Hummingbirds

November 2, 2011
By cyberunfamous SILVER, Melbourne, Florida
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Zip, zap, buzz, flitting around the garden.
The humming bird, on its merry way home.
To little ones at home, she’s a warden.
Protecting them from the bad garden gnome.
Finding food is not that easy to do.
It seems as though it’s all she has time for.
The babies are hard to please through and through.
The family always wants so much more.
Soon the day comes for the babies to fly.
They soar off to lands unknown all alone.
By themselves they’re just trying to get by.
Their aspirations are set into stone.
They reach their destination, worn out,
hoping against confusion, mostly drought.

© Ashley P., Galesburg, IL

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This is my very first sonnet. I wrote it for my English class.
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cyberunfamous SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2011 at 1:33 pm
cyberunfamous SILVER, Melbourne, Florida
8 articles 1 photo 24 comments

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Shutting your eyes and pretending something isn't happening doesn't make it not true.

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thank you :) its the one i did for K-Dogs class.  my very first sonnet. i just dont think the end flowed as well as it could have but it works
Belluna45 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 11 2011 at 12:42 pm
Belluna45 PLATINUM, Shelbyville, Kentucky
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this is a really good sonnet, i love to description of the hummingbirds!