Sonnet of the Broken Heart

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People say love is no good.

It always seems to betray you in the end,

When your heart gets broken you will stay in one mood.

Now it is very hard for your heart to mend.

It is possible but it won’t happen over night.

The mind must heal first

Of the harsh fright

That had come along what you think is the worst

Day of your life.

The feeling will drop like blood from a fresh cut.

Almost like a knife

Piercing your tender heart, you are out of luck.

Your heart is burning.

Tables are deeply turning.





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Buffalo said...
Nov. 6, 2011 at 10:40 pm
Very nice.
 
horsewriter4evr said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 7:22 pm
thanks friendi feel free to check out the other sonnets i wrote :)
 
Heart_Of_The_Wolf17 replied...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 11:03 pm
Oh I have. I just haven't commented or rated them yet. I will though.
 
Heart_Of_The_Wolf17 said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 7:18 pm
Hey friendi, it's me, your "twin". I know that you already know this, but I absolutely love, love, love your writing. I think it's awesome that I know who you're talking about when you write. I just love everything you do. I Love You Awesome Friendi! Keep writing!
 
horsewriter4evr said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 9:41 pm
thanks i'm glad you like to read this poem over and over again i know i do
 
horsewriter4evr said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 9:40 pm
thanks i'm trying to write poems more often
 
Lexie96 said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 8:39 pm
I absolutely love the end with the turning tables bit... that's fantastic. If you have the time I would love to hear your feedback on my work!
 
Wordweaver said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 3:00 pm
The content is deep. I read it several times like I do most poems I am really fond of...I especially like the line, "...The mind must heal first."  So true...
 
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