Sonnet of the Broken Heart

October 23, 2011
By Belluna45 PLATINUM, Shelbyville, Kentucky
Belluna45 PLATINUM, Shelbyville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Look after my heart- I've left it with you."
-Stephenie Meyer (Eclipse (Twilight #3))
"Either write something worth reading or do something wor
th writing."
-Benjamin Franklin
"A dishonest man you can always trust to be dishonest."
-Johnny Depp


People say love is no good.

It always seems to betray you in the end,

When your heart gets broken you will stay in one mood.

Now it is very hard for your heart to mend.

It is possible but it won’t happen over night.

The mind must heal first

Of the harsh fright

That had come along what you think is the worst

Day of your life.

The feeling will drop like blood from a fresh cut.

Almost like a knife

Piercing your tender heart, you are out of luck.

Your heart is burning.

Tables are deeply turning.



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Buffalo BRONZE said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 10:40 pm
Buffalo BRONZE, Camarillo, Delaware
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Very nice.

on Nov. 2 2011 at 11:03 pm
cyberunfamous SILVER, Melbourne, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Shutting your eyes and pretending something isn't happening doesn't make it not true.

Oh I have. I just haven't commented or rated them yet. I will though.

on Nov. 2 2011 at 7:22 pm
Belluna45 PLATINUM, Shelbyville, Kentucky
31 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Look after my heart- I've left it with you."
-Stephenie Meyer (Eclipse (Twilight #3))
"Either write something worth reading or do something wor
th writing."
-Benjamin Franklin
"A dishonest man you can always trust to be dishonest."
-Johnny Depp

thanks friendi feel free to check out the other sonnets i wrote :)

on Nov. 2 2011 at 7:18 pm
cyberunfamous SILVER, Melbourne, Florida
8 articles 1 photo 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shutting your eyes and pretending something isn't happening doesn't make it not true.

Hey friendi, it's me, your "twin". I know that you already know this, but I absolutely love, love, love your writing. I think it's awesome that I know who you're talking about when you write. I just love everything you do. I Love You Awesome Friendi! Keep writing!

on Oct. 30 2011 at 9:41 pm
Belluna45 PLATINUM, Shelbyville, Kentucky
31 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Look after my heart- I've left it with you."
-Stephenie Meyer (Eclipse (Twilight #3))
"Either write something worth reading or do something wor
th writing."
-Benjamin Franklin
"A dishonest man you can always trust to be dishonest."
-Johnny Depp

thanks i'm glad you like to read this poem over and over again i know i do

on Oct. 30 2011 at 9:40 pm
Belluna45 PLATINUM, Shelbyville, Kentucky
31 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Look after my heart- I've left it with you."
-Stephenie Meyer (Eclipse (Twilight #3))
"Either write something worth reading or do something wor
th writing."
-Benjamin Franklin
"A dishonest man you can always trust to be dishonest."
-Johnny Depp

thanks i'm trying to write poems more often

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2011 at 8:39 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I absolutely love the end with the turning tables bit... that's fantastic. If you have the time I would love to hear your feedback on my work!

Wordweaver said...
on Oct. 30 2011 at 3:00 pm
The content is deep. I read it several times like I do most poems I am really fond of...I especially like the line, "...The mind must heal first."  So true...


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