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An apple from the Garden of Eden
Odd numbers that can never be even
Superman and kryptonite together
Can human nowadays live forever?
A love like that of Romeo and Juliet
Minors in casino the ones that bet
An ogre falling in love with Fiona
Can minors nowadays have some Henna?
Life as hard as that of Bonnie and Clyde
With these things, I do always have to hide
There are rules we do not want to follow
Because we always want to be hollow
But the law is the one that is lawless
There is never anything that is flawless





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CaptainFabulous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 6:25 am
You have some real talent, fabulous poem!
 
zone7494 said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 9:40 am
I'm loving this poem because it's really great 5 stars. I would appreciate it if you would give me some feedback on my poems too.
 
TwasBrilling said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 7:44 pm
To me, this is about contradictions, morals, fate, ect. I like it, alot!
 
Emily.L said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 4:05 pm

I loved the lines

"But the law is the one that is lawless

There is never anything that is flawless."

Amazing poem. 5 stars!

 
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