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You cannot do something like Spiderman
You cannot fly or what like Superman
But you run your mouth like dog barking
You talk non-stop like an engine running
You talk about your G6 from afar
But I wonder if it is Batman's car
Because all I see is nothing at all!
Can you even catch me when I fall?
You said you put them down in a second
They are up and you look like an almond
They made you wear those wounds and bruises, right?
It is clear you are nothing for a fight
With yours words, I am growing big with doubts
So, please, stop running seven hundred mouths...





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ItsAshMal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 10:47 am
You've made this so funny and upbeat, I was almost laughing. It's really a fun, great read. A couple of times I felt like you were stretching to make the lines uniform (almond?), but the juxtoposition of superhuman and super pompous made this a fun read. 
 
JoPepper said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 12:16 pm
This is very good I like the way you described things!!!!!! :D
 
Mystiecub said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 9:12 am
I liked the comparisons in this piece, it really kept me interested :D
 
betweenyouandi said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 9:58 pm
I loved the examples in this! Very well written :)
 
Emily.L said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 4:04 pm
Nicely written with great examples :) I liked it!
 
Raytheraym said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:43 am
This is kind of funny. But, also very true. I like your word choice. :)
 
DaylightDarkness said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 7:14 pm
I really appreciated this, there are a few people id like to show this too... myself included when my mouth starts running. well done.
 
NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 3:03 pm
Although parts of it don't make much sense, I can see where you're going with it. I like the concept of telling yourself to stop bragging and talking about things that aren't quite true. Good job!
 
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