Hug Me

July 27, 2010
By surviver101 GOLD, Houston, Texas
surviver101 GOLD, Houston, Texas
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Hold me tight
Hold me strong
Hold me like
I’ll soon be gone
Hold me near
Hold me with love
Hold me like
I never could have
Hold me sturdy
Hold my fierce
Hold to where
Nothing can pierce
Hold me high
Hold me low
Hold me
And never let go
I need your hugs
To last forever
Cause when I crack
You’ll be the only thing
To hold me together



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on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:40 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

love..love..LOVE this!! :) it rolls of the tongue great. and as the poem goes on, it builds suspense. the ending of the poem is perfect :) it's really sweet, and wonderfully written :) would you mind commenting on some of my new stuff? thanks! :)




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