Hidden Pain, Lost Hope…

July 26, 2010
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Her eyes rain like tear drops from the black skies,
She runs for shelter through her thickened lies,
Hopes for a new horizon in her life,
Her only friend is a dull knife,
She only listens to the wise,
Giving her a future of strife,

She destroyed her life of hope, and caused pain,
So lost in her heart, she can not keep sane,
I reach my hand to her as a last chance,
She is unsure about romance,
You have lost, but me you did gain,
Your eyes have put me in a trance,

My love for you is strong, so what is wrong,
Finally found where I want to belong,
Take my hand and let’s run away,
There’s not more I want to say,
Hope was here, love is strong,
You’re like a fine figure molded from clay,

Trust me; hope is on the rise again now,
The new horizon brings me such awe and wow,
She lifts me up with a new hope,
No more need to want to do mope,
Hidden pain takes its bow,
No longer will I cope,

Her unyielding radiance graces me,
She is the new horizon by the sea.

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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 12:00 pm
Wow this is so amaing!! it needs to be published!! could u please rate and check out my work?? thatd be great!! thanks and ur so good!!
JewBoi replied...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 9:07 pm
Thank you so much for reading my sonnet. I very much look foward to reading your work too. Until then thanks for the great critism...
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