First Crush

July 9, 2010
By Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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In this beautiful world,
you seemed nothing special!
I wasn't even looking at you,
as you were talking to those girls.

But soon came the day,
I saw you in pain.
Your eyes 'teary',
and wounds were all that my heart had gained.

I couldn't realize,
what I was feeling.
Why I cared for you so much?
And why wasn't I healing?

But now I'm old enough
to know all my rush.
Even if you don't care for me,
You'll always remain my'Sweet First Crush'.


The author's comments:
I have written this to express my feelings when I had my first crush..We all know even if we laugh at it later but first crush is for lifetime.

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on Nov. 17 2017 at 2:59 pm
Shrivastava SILVER, Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself no matter what they say

Loved it and also glad to see someone from india

Catniss SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2017 at 11:10 am
Catniss SILVER, Jakarta, Other
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This is just a lovely and somewhat relatable poem. I do hope you find true love one day!

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2010 at 5:30 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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Thank you so much!I'm glad that you liked it.First crush really is a very sweet memmory.I'll def check out your works..Thanks again :)

J.C.Evans GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 8:46 pm
J.C.Evans GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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Aww this is so sweet! First crush...such a fun memory lol still remember mine...Daniel Johnson from the 4th grade lol you captured the youthful feeling so well and the rhyme is great! I love it! If you have the chance, I would appreciate it if you could check out my work sometime;)

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 8:22 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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Thank you so much!

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 8:21 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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Thanks for the lovely comment :)

Emilia901 GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:11 pm
Emilia901 GOLD, Moreno Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Fiction reveals truths that reality obscures." Jessamyn West

I remember my first real crush..yup didn't end so well. I love the emotion you put into your poem it was really beautiful =^_^=

on Aug. 10 2010 at 5:49 pm
bluerose13 PLATINUM, Oceanside, California
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Favorite Quote:
Live your life to the fullest

u are amazing!! i could actually feel the way u felt in this poem!! I LOVE it!


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