First Crush

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In this beautiful world,
you seemed nothing special!
I wasn't even looking at you,
as you were talking to those girls.

But soon came the day,
I saw you in pain.
Your eyes 'teary',
and wounds were all that my heart had gained.

I couldn't realize,
what I was feeling.
Why I cared for you so much?
And why wasn't I healing?

But now I'm old enough
to know all my rush.
Even if you don't care for me,
You'll always remain my'Sweet First Crush'.

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Shrivastava said...
today at 2:59 pm
Loved it and also glad to see someone from india
CatnissThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 11 at 11:10 am
This is just a lovely and somewhat relatable poem. I do hope you find true love one day!
J.C.Evans This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 8:46 pm
Aww this is so sweet! First crush...such a fun memory lol still remember mine...Daniel Johnson from the 4th grade lol you captured the youthful feeling so well and the rhyme is great! I love it! If you have the chance, I would appreciate it if you could check out my work sometime;)
nightingle replied...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 5:30 am
Thank you so much!I'm glad that you liked it.First crush really is a very sweet memmory.I'll def check out your works..Thanks again :)
Emilia901 said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 6:11 pm
I remember my first real crush..yup didn't end so well. I love the emotion you put into your poem it was really beautiful =^_^=
nightingle replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 8:22 am
Thank you so much!
bluerose13 said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 5:49 pm
u are amazing!! i could actually feel the way u felt in this poem!! I LOVE it!
nightingle replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 8:21 am
Thanks for the lovely comment :)
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