A Healthy Addiction

July 7, 2010
By smartblonde SILVER, Pardeeville, Wisconsin
smartblonde SILVER, Pardeeville, Wisconsin
7 articles 18 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You were born an original. Don't die a copy." - John Mason


Why am I addicted to your presence,
It's as if I have known you forever,
As if I'm about to drown in your essence,
To figure you out is my next endeavor.

I cannot help it if my mind wanders,
You in entirety are addicting,
Staring deep in you eyes my mind ponders,
Many thoughts are very contradicting.

How can I be so consumed just by you,
You may be just another simple guy,
Not to me, you liven my world in hue,
You are way more than what just meets the eye.

Right now if you only knew how I feel,
This addiction may become more surreal.


The author's comments:
Written for a friend. :)

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on Aug. 8 2010 at 8:10 pm
smartblonde SILVER, Pardeeville, Wisconsin
7 articles 18 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You were born an original. Don't die a copy." - John Mason

Thanks! :) and will do

on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:19 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow :) what else to say?? i know just how this feels. you explained all the emotion and thoughts perfectly. i love how the poem flows perfectly. great work here! :) would you mind commenting on some of my work? thanks :)


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