July 6, 2010
By RonnieLi BRONZE, Great Neck, New York
RonnieLi BRONZE, Great Neck, New York
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If ever shall you of your feelings speak
And every shard of truth to me unveil,
No matter if it’s praise or high critique,
To gently tame your tears I’ll never fail.

Despotic fate will soon prepare us both
For severing all trace of love we bred
And we’ll recant and spurn this precious oath,
Developing new vows of faith instead.

But when we break may you contentment find
With someone who will live to die with you
Begin afresh and leave me far behind
The dream that you decided to pursue.

Because of you my heart was often torn,
Yet pity me, had you been never born.

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on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:17 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

amazing :) beautiful! i can feel all the emotion in this and i can picture everything perfectly :) i love this! 5 stars :) would you mind commenting on some of my work? thanks! love this piece :)

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