Don't You See Me?

June 29, 2010
By tiffanyg BRONZE, North Highlands, California
tiffanyg BRONZE, North Highlands, California
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Favorite Quote:
Even ailed a broken heart, a lover's care does not depart.


Don't you see me?
We both lay here
I witness your tragedy
all over my care
You're wrapped up in lovely
like the free-falling tear
from my dreaming eyes, gleaming
We both lay here
Don't you see me, though I was only dreaming?
Can you not stay, Dear,
for just a little longer?
Can you not feel, hear
that you were near me,
Even if only in a dream?



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on Jul. 25 2010 at 12:30 pm
bakedbeans PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
People often ask me "why are you so fast?" and my reply was "ask a basketball player why he or she keep making three point shots in a row or ask a football player why is he so good at breaking tackles. its practice!!! common sense idiot!!!" Charles.C

this is good can you comment on mines too thanks

on Jul. 24 2010 at 1:18 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This is beautiful... and a little sad. But it was extraordinarily well worded.


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