Don't You See Me?

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Don't you see me?
We both lay here
I witness your tragedy
all over my care
You're wrapped up in lovely
like the free-falling tear
from my dreaming eyes, gleaming
We both lay here
Don't you see me, though I was only dreaming?
Can you not stay, Dear,
for just a little longer?
Can you not feel, hear
that you were near me,
Even if only in a dream?





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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 1:18 pm
This is beautiful... and a little sad. But it was extraordinarily well worded.
 
bakedbeans replied...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 12:30 pm
this is good can you comment on mines too thanks
 
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