Dreaming Out Loud

May 25, 2010
Well we've graduated eighth grade
and school's been let out.
I'm lucky if I get to see you
just once a week now.
I can't help but wonder though
when will mother get too tough,
and decide that once a week
with you is too much?
So when the movies get too long
or the music gets too loud,
just take my hand in yours
and pull me away from the crowd.
Then press your lips against mine,
soft and slow and sweet,
wrap your arms around my waist
and sweep me off my feet.
Say you love me like it's true,
sweet and soft and slow,
then lean down and kiss me again,
hug me and pull me close.
I'm wishing, wanting, waiting for
the day when you just might
make that really happen
not just in my dreams at night…





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 2:19 pm
its not pathetic if no one's expecting you to be a stalker. i love this captain. i love the rhyming sheme and the fact that you were just dreaming.
 
Carolyn Jo S. said...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 5:38 pm

this is so good!!!

Check my stuff out if ya have time =)

 
ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 11:33 am

omg ! this is amazing ! fantastic writer ! :) Dont ever stop

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u

 

 
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