Betrayl

May 4, 2010
By frankiefall3n SILVER, Thornwood, New York
frankiefall3n SILVER, Thornwood, New York
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the clouds draw in from the west
seeing this storm brew and wondering if its the end
as the morning begins I get dressed
its another day to loose a friend

this betrayal has left me broken
rain begins to pour so hard
a great best in side of him is awoken
my mind is scattered across the yard

each piece is now gone
cant you see this is never how I wanted it to be?
our connections have been withdrawn
wouldnt you agree?

if only we could flip the hour glass
but in my mind I'd pass

The author's comments:
I dont know if this ones my best piece,but I had thoughts that I was loosing a friend so I had to write this.

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on Jul. 6 2010 at 10:53 am
frankiefall3n SILVER, Thornwood, New York
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Thank you :]

Means a lot to me and I don't know sometimes I don't think my works that great, but I guess people think otherwise


on Jul. 6 2010 at 10:51 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

I'm really nowt that good at explaining my feelings for writing but, the way you write makes me feel like I'm actually there and I can feel the pain. This is really good. If this isn't your best, your best will be ah-mazing! :)


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