May 4, 2010
the clouds draw in from the west
seeing this storm brew and wondering if its the end
as the morning begins I get dressed
its another day to loose a friend

this betrayal has left me broken
rain begins to pour so hard
a great best in side of him is awoken
my mind is scattered across the yard

each piece is now gone
cant you see this is never how I wanted it to be?
our connections have been withdrawn
wouldnt you agree?

if only we could flip the hour glass
but in my mind I'd pass

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ellyn-bo-bellyn_2014 said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 10:51 am
I'm really nowt that good at explaining my feelings for writing but, the way you write makes me feel like I'm actually there and I can feel the pain. This is really good. If this isn't your best, your best will be ah-mazing! :)
frankiefall3n replied...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 10:53 am

Thank you :]

Means a lot to me and I don't know sometimes I don't think my works that great, but I guess people think otherwise

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