Your Eyes

May 2, 2010
Your eyes are like a maze,
Because every time i stare i get lost in your gaze,
I hate it when you shed tears,
Because it just mirrors and mirrors,
Your eyes touch my heart,
They're like a great work of art.

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mr.fingers said...
Jun. 25, 2010 at 5:23 pm
I read the first line and loved the metaphor. The whole thing went down hill from there. What you should have done is continued the maze thing. Kinda gone into how unlike other mazes, in this one you try to get more lost in hope that you never have to leave. By the way, i've been the one rating all your poems 2-stars. You start with good ideas but then ruin them, but keep practicing those metaphors; you have potential.
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