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Peaceful, passionate, you are my whole world.
Your hugs and kisses make me feel complete.
Whenever I see you, my stomach twirls.
You’re so perfect, you’re what makes my heart beat.

Then I am in your arms, I feel adored.
Seeing you makes me feel like I’m dreaming,
Having you is forever an award.
Seeing your sweet eyes, makes mine start beaming.

And I’m so amazed to say that you’re mine.
‘Cuz you make my life so easy and fun.
You make all of my days and smiles shine bright.
You are my, so very special someone.

And God to give me you, I must be blessed.
Because you are by far, the very best.



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mightierthanthesword said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 7:10 am:
A sweet poem, very relatable, keep on writing! Nice job with the rhymming scheme. I especially liked the last two lines.
 
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CandyGirl636This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 24, 2010 at 12:38 pm:
Sorry, sam sam but bree is my best friens and i like her poem so chill!
 
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Sam Sam 123 :-) said...
May 22, 2010 at 8:19 pm:
Hey who is this candy girl.. Dont be a suck up cuz its not getting u anywhere.. haha  Btw nice poem bree :-P
 
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Candy C. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 18, 2010 at 10:17 am:
Bree I love this....I wish I could wright as good as you!!! And you know that!!!! :)
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 17, 2010 at 10:17 am:
i'm impressed for a first time sonnet writer :) haha. this is really good! i like the nice picture you painted here, it's really sweet :) i think your boyfriend would really enjoy this poem, it's pretty amazing :) well done!! would you mind commenting on some of my work?
 
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