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My whole World

April 25, 2010
By Briana_25 BRONZE, Stockton Springs, Maine
Briana_25 BRONZE, Stockton Springs, Maine
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Peaceful, passionate, you are my whole world.
Your hugs and kisses make me feel complete.
Whenever I see you, my stomach twirls.
You’re so perfect, you’re what makes my heart beat.

Then I am in your arms, I feel adored.
Seeing you makes me feel like I’m dreaming,
Having you is forever an award.
Seeing your sweet eyes, makes mine start beaming.

And I’m so amazed to say that you’re mine.
‘Cuz you make my life so easy and fun.
You make all of my days and smiles shine bright.
You are my, so very special someone.

And God to give me you, I must be blessed.
Because you are by far, the very best.

The author's comments:
This was my very first sonnet, I wanted to make it special. Therefore, I wrote it about my boyfriend.

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on Oct. 22 2011 at 7:10 am
pens-are-mightier-than-swords SILVER, Caledonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"we often put up walls not to keep people out, but to see who cares enough to break them down"
~Author Unknown

A sweet poem, very relatable, keep on writing! Nice job with the rhymming scheme. I especially liked the last two lines.

on May. 24 2010 at 12:38 pm
CandyGirl636 GOLD, Searsport, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
I have a lot of faverote quotes.......
LOVE PEACE AND CHICKEN GREESE <3
HAKUNA MATATA
NEVER LET THE FEAR OF STRIKNIG OUT KEEP YOU FROM PLAYING THE GAME.
Pain is weekness levaving ones body.
I'm not random you just cant think as fast as me.

Sorry, sam sam but bree is my best friens and i like her poem so chill!

on May. 22 2010 at 8:19 pm
Hey who is this candy girl.. Dont be a suck up cuz its not getting u anywhere.. haha  Btw nice poem bree :-P

on May. 18 2010 at 10:17 am
CandyGirl636 GOLD, Searsport, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
I have a lot of faverote quotes.......
LOVE PEACE AND CHICKEN GREESE <3
HAKUNA MATATA
NEVER LET THE FEAR OF STRIKNIG OUT KEEP YOU FROM PLAYING THE GAME.
Pain is weekness levaving ones body.
I'm not random you just cant think as fast as me.

Bree I love this....I wish I could wright as good as you!!! And you know that!!!! :)

on May. 17 2010 at 10:17 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i'm impressed for a first time sonnet writer :) haha. this is really good! i like the nice picture you painted here, it's really sweet :) i think your boyfriend would really enjoy this poem, it's pretty amazing :) well done!! would you mind commenting on some of my work?