April 2, 2010
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Im falling through into the dark abyss,
Gone through the rabbit hole, watch me as I weep,
Sharp shooting breeze, like a poisoned kiss,
Body and mind are sound asleep,

This is wonderous, spectacular, divine!
Though I can't find home, help,
Mad Hatter approaches, his hair red as wine,
Chuckles and giggles all the time, like a puppy dog's yelp!

Rabbit! He scurries along like a roadrunner,
Fast as he is, he is elegant and proper,
"I am late! Oh-so late" he is gone in a blur,
The rabbit is quite the show stopper!

Wonderland. Heaven on earth, it IS life!
Awoken under a tree, awoken from a dream?
Possibly went as agile as a slitting knife,
Wonderland. Let it take you away like a flowing stream!

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Bluerain said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 8:56 pm
this is really good!i love the book alice in wonderland
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Apr. 19, 2010 at 11:52 am
this could be a wonderland anthem. I think this is the wonderland anthem. "watch me as I weep"-nice, very nice.
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