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The Universe

It's time to go I guess
Cuz everyone's leaving
Spread across the globe
It's like we're all fleeting
Running away from our destined fate
But doesn't everyone know that it's far too late?
Whatever the universe has planned for us is going to happen
You can't run
You can't hide
You can't beg
You can't strive
You might as well just give in
Cuz you and I know the universe will win



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beautifuldreamer said...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 9:50 pm:
Thanks for the comment! I personally believe in chance, not fate, but I really like how you presented it :) especially the line "it's like we're all fleeting"
 
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BlackHoleHighAlumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 9:34 pm:
Well, I don't believe the "universe", I believe in God, but this is an amazing poem. :) It's really amazing! Great job!
 
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