Describe To Me Love

March 15, 2010
By TheColorRose BRONZE, Springfield, Illinois
TheColorRose BRONZE, Springfield, Illinois
3 articles 2 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live deliberately." Live infinitely.
-Thoreau


Describe to me love in a single shade
This love that leaves you on sea green floorboards,
Ocean wave whispers upon your hearts’ chords.
A new, green love whose color never fades.
An innocent love, crisp as a grass blade,
That etches your names into old park trees.
Is there no hue that paints love beautifully?
Maybe one shade of love cannot be made.
Maybe, to each his own color of love.
A hue that envelopes what love can be.
Like warm, summer storms encircling you,
Sky blue memories are the basis of
Your painting in which you describe to me
Each shade of your love, and each shade of you.



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on Jun. 12 2010 at 4:07 pm
TheColorRose BRONZE, Springfield, Illinois
3 articles 2 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live deliberately." Live infinitely.
-Thoreau

banangela29- i actually agree with what you're saying, though i don't think you can edit your work once it's posted..i'm not sure. and thanks for your thoughts.

andthevinesspin- :) thanks for commenting back


on Jun. 12 2010 at 2:55 pm
aaaaaqweqweqwe SILVER, Somewhere, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 67 comments
Awww this is cute. The only thing I could suggest to be changed would be in the lines "Maybe one shade of love cannot be made/ Maybe to each his own color of love" it seems like the word "perhaps" would fit better than "maybe"...just a suggestion. Otherwise, it was excellent :)

on Jun. 12 2010 at 1:51 pm
AndTheVinesSpin GOLD, Romulus, Michigan
11 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is the Movement" -TWLOHA
"Love is our weapon." -Christofer Drew
"I'ma get me a High School Diploma, even if I gotta steal one!" -ThisKidInMyMathClassLol

Mine would be purple. I love this;

five stars.

[Thankyou sooo much for your comments, hearing what people thinks makes my day. I always return favours. =]



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