Describe To Me Love

March 15, 2010
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Describe to me love in a single shade
This love that leaves you on sea green floorboards,
Ocean wave whispers upon your hearts’ chords.
A new, green love whose color never fades.
An innocent love, crisp as a grass blade,
That etches your names into old park trees.
Is there no hue that paints love beautifully?
Maybe one shade of love cannot be made.
Maybe, to each his own color of love.
A hue that envelopes what love can be.
Like warm, summer storms encircling you,
Sky blue memories are the basis of
Your painting in which you describe to me
Each shade of your love, and each shade of you.





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TheColorRose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 4:07 pm

banangela29- i actually agree with what you're saying, though i don't think you can edit your work once it's posted..i'm not sure. and thanks for your thoughts.

andthevinesspin- :) thanks for commenting back

 
banangela29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 2:55 pm
Awww this is cute. The only thing I could suggest to be changed would be in the lines "Maybe one shade of love cannot be made/ Maybe to each his own color of love" it seems like the word "perhaps" would fit better than "maybe"...just a suggestion. Otherwise, it was excellent :)
 
AndTheVinesSpin said...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 1:51 pm

Mine would be purple. I love this;

five stars.

[Thankyou sooo much for your comments, hearing what people thinks makes my day. I always return favours. =]

 
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