Where Am I?

March 15, 2010
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Some things aren't meant for the eyes,
They can make you go insane,
It may make you scream, cry,
Choose the wrong path? On another lane,

You have every reason to fret,
This isn't life anymore,
You can't call for help, don't forget,
This is alll death and gore,

Here in the unknown,
It's as if the darkness is the light,
Prepare to have your mind blown,
Run for your life? You just might,

Unless the immortal beings take you first,
Cursed, having a diseased mind,
Scared yet? Your mind will burst!
This is no time for comfort, no time to be kind.

You are now entering disturbia,
Turn around once and you yell 'AH!'





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Naomi said...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 5:25 pm
I really like this one a lot, most of your writing is awesome. ive read all of it (:
 
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Apr. 19, 2010 at 11:54 am
I love the ending. I like the poem but I really love the ending.
 
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