The World Above

March 12, 2010
By reustice BRONZE, South Plaifield, New Jersey
reustice BRONZE, South Plaifield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"if youre going to be two faces, atleast make one pretty"


Soemtimes i look in to the high blue sky

the yellow glow nearly blinds my eyesight

i feel as if like is a big white lie

it's hard to believe that it is twilight

if i am lucky, i will see a dove

even in the daylight i see the big moon

these birds have made me full of love

it liiks like a big party of balloons

people say the sky is the limit

clouds fill it in different sizes

some dark days the sky looks very timid

maybe this world is full of new prizes

there is a whole other world above us

but we cannot travel there by a bus.


The author's comments:
this piece made quickly so i could get credit.

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on May. 17 2010 at 3:32 pm
brianababy BRONZE, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"While your talking about me behinde my back.. you can kiss my a**"

oh my gosh, daring this piece of work is amazing. i love the last two libes. keep writing babe.

on May. 17 2010 at 7:31 am
reustice BRONZE, South Plaifield, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if youre going to be two faces, atleast make one pretty"

Thank you, but i realize you wrote this on many other peoples poems. So i take offense.

Milo! said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 7:47 am

Wow. It’s impossible not to be in love with this. It’s truly amazing. It really captures the emotion you’re trying to convey. Keep writing, because I want to see more. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

 



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