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Soemtimes i look in to the high blue sky

the yellow glow nearly blinds my eyesight

i feel as if like is a big white lie

it's hard to believe that it is twilight

if i am lucky, i will see a dove

even in the daylight i see the big moon

these birds have made me full of love

it liiks like a big party of balloons

people say the sky is the limit

clouds fill it in different sizes

some dark days the sky looks very timid

maybe this world is full of new prizes

there is a whole other world above us

but we cannot travel there by a bus.





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Milo! said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 7:47 am

Wow. It’s impossible not to be in love with this. It’s truly amazing. It really captures the emotion you’re trying to convey. Keep writing, because I want to see more. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

 

 
reustice replied...
May 17, 2010 at 7:31 am
Thank you, but i realize you wrote this on many other peoples poems. So i take offense.
 
brianababy replied...
May 17, 2010 at 3:32 pm
oh my gosh, daring this piece of work is amazing. i love the last two libes. keep writing babe.
 
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