Emotionally insane

By , washington, DC
Black clothed girl, I can see through your soul,
Starring into your Heart I can see all of the holes,
From some you may try to hide it, but I Know,
You’re Emotional and Physical Scars do Show.

Making yourself Bleed, Trying to Release the pain,
Feels kind of good when you’re cutting close to your veins,
You’re emotionally INSANE.

You need help, but that you just don’t want,
You secretly Yearn for it, Come on let’s just be up Front.

Happiness came, and then it quickly left,
I think it took the rest of your Soul too,
You should call and report a theft...
Because you’re left here with the pain, cutting closer to your veins,
Stranded all alone... Emotionally INSANE.

When are you going to Stop?
-When there’s no more blood left to Bleed.

Are you going to Kill Yourself?
-Yes, Those are my intentions ... Indeed.

You NEED help, but you don’t want it, secretly you crave it,
I want to help find your Soul, and then I want to save it,
I must Act Fast don’t know how long you’re going to last...
With this pain, As You Cut through your veins....







Emotionally INSANE.





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Dessometrics said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 10:15 am
beautifully written
 
dreamer_believer said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 10:04 am
i read this a while ago and i really enjoyed it. but i enjoyed it even more this time :) it's very deep. and it's sad but a lot of people are just like this! you did a great job describing everything. the poem had really nice rhythm too :) i really really like this...5 stars :) would you mind commenting on some of my work?
 
Buddyboo said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 3:55 pm
I thought it was OK, but I mean, coming from someone who knows cutting personally, it's nothing like what you made it up to be....
 
Lori`Acee replied...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 11:15 am
Well thanks for ur opinion, but maybe its not like that for YOU, this is based on a true story.
 
Chelz said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 12:56 pm
I like it but it was a little all over but it still made since
 
Lori`Acee replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 4:18 pm
thanks, may i ask what exactly do you mean by "all over" ?
 
fml.says.it.all replied...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 11:23 am
I think she meant "all over" by like It didn't like all work together in the order it was in. I thought it did and loved it. What I don't love about it is if the poem is about you.
 
Lori`Acee replied...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 11:16 am
Well, thanks.
 
A_Mexicana replied...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 6:08 pm
fml.says.it.all is right. its not okay or cool if this is about you. but i love the poem.
 
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