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Not loving you is harder than you know.
It takes time, prayers and buckets of tears.
For it is not easy to just let go,
Of my love for you which erased my fears.
With every breath I take, I think of you,
Your eyes, your laughter, your sweet messages.
For I love you, though you'll not love me too,
Even if I cry or wait in ages.
I don't want to ever let go of thee.
You don't want to ever let go of her.
But she already dumped you, can't you see?
So please stop waiting for her forever.
I swear I will never leave you mourning,
So open your eyes and see the morning...



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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 24, 2012 at 9:49 pm:

Beautiful! Very descriptive, and you can really feel the character's sadness. Good job!

Please check out, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
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Oct. 6, 2012 at 8:30 pm :
^That's me. Mind checking out my work?:)
 
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***Rain*** said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 8:35 pm:
I know about something like this that is happening to one of my friends.
 
numbheart21 replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 6:37 am :
really? then we are just experiencing the same.. haha..:p anyway, thanks for the post!:)
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 5:38 pm:
wow! how many people can relate to this?! LOVE it :) so many people can understand exactly how this feels. great job capturing all the emotions :) would you mind checking out some of my work? id love your opinion :) please keep writing!!
 
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Milo! said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 3:42 pm:
This is a great poem because it's something we can all relate to at one point or another.
You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
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