Open Your Eyes

February 23, 2010
By numbheart21 GOLD, Antipolo, Other
numbheart21 GOLD, Antipolo, Other
10 articles 8 photos 8 comments

Not loving you is harder than you know.
It takes time, prayers and buckets of tears.
For it is not easy to just let go,
Of my love for you which erased my fears.
With every breath I take, I think of you,
Your eyes, your laughter, your sweet messages.
For I love you, though you'll not love me too,
Even if I cry or wait in ages.
I don't want to ever let go of thee.
You don't want to ever let go of her.
But she already dumped you, can't you see?
So please stop waiting for her forever.
I swear I will never leave you mourning,
So open your eyes and see the morning...


The author's comments:
a sonnet conveying the agony of someone whose loved a man that she cannot get, yet just got dumped by other girls...

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on Oct. 6 2012 at 8:30 pm
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on Jul. 24 2012 at 9:49 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Beautiful! Very descriptive, and you can really feel the character's sadness. Good job!

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on Mar. 18 2010 at 6:37 am
numbheart21 GOLD, Antipolo, Other
10 articles 8 photos 8 comments
really? then we are just experiencing the same.. haha..:p anyway, thanks for the post!:)

on Mar. 16 2010 at 8:35 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

I know about something like this that is happening to one of my friends.

on Mar. 16 2010 at 5:38 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow! how many people can relate to this?! LOVE it :) so many people can understand exactly how this feels. great job capturing all the emotions :) would you mind checking out some of my work? id love your opinion :) please keep writing!!

Milo! said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 3:42 pm
This is a great poem because it's something we can all relate to at one point or another.

You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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