A Beautiful Place

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Once the sun gets so warm,
And everything is bright.
How beautiful is
The whole world in sight?

The place where we are,
Never gets cold.
All of it is green,
A sight to behold.

Can you guess where we are
On this beautiful day?
It's a new place to be,
In a wonderful way.





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Milo! said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 11:13 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
SaddleShoeGal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 4:52 pm
Thank you! I've written many more poems like this, except I haven't posted them on yet. I'll be sure to look at what you have.
 
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