Colors of the Wind

February 15, 2010
Rain cleans the mountains like a new white board
They turn so green and camouflage the trees
I would look at them all day and not be bored
With my hair gently swaying in the breeze

Sunshine is bright and lovely in the sky
Sun is good for playing at the park
Picking flowers outside no more goodbye
I hope it never ever will get dark

Snow gives the chance for creativity
Remember not to eat the yellow kind
Loving the snow angel you made for me
Attack with snow ball fights from the behind

My home has mountains, oceans, and some trees
I love all the possibilities

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celia<3 said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 1:07 am
just kidding..... i loved it.... i wanted to sound mean via internet.... i did. HAH intimidating!!!!! i bet u dont know who this is! and i bet they arent in ur spanish class!!!!!
enchanted4yu replied...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 5:34 pm
thanks fatty <3
celia<3 said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 12:54 am
the title should be changed, it was pretty good. grammar errors
ZadaRox101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 9:42 am
I like it! Really, really good!
enchanted4yu replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 9:50 am
thank you!
Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 3:48 pm
its so cute! i love the ryme sceme. and let me tell you, you r reaching teens, well for now atleast one. lol. although im pretty sure im a little mature for my age. you can see it in my eyes.
enchanted4yu replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 12:58 am
Thank you so so much
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