Apology

February 7, 2010
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When I lie in the grass and the sky’s pouring rain,
I think about you and my heart pounds again,
remembering when you reached for my hand, and
the picnic that didn’t quite go as planned.
We sat in a storm, our hair dripping wet –
you said that you loved me. But I’ll never forget
the way your eyes blazed when you found out my lies;
the way that you hit me, the way that I cried;
the way you stalked off, with no second glance.
All I wanted from you was one second chance.
But it’s too late now, as I lie here and weep.
It was my mistake, and I got in too deep.
I wish, deep inside, to say sorry again,
as I get up and dance, and the sky’s pouring rain.





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outsidethebox said...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 12:12 pm

This rocks

 

 
dreamer_believer said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 1:03 pm
amazing!!! :) wow. i can feel all the emotion and heartbreak in this poem. very strong and well written piece :) i LOVE it!! would you mind checking out soe of my work? id love your opinion :) keep writing....your good :)
 
This*Lit*Is*Bananas This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 7:53 pm
Thanks so much! Sure, I'll read some of your work . :)
 
lilyraven said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 4:39 pm
Wow this is really good! I love it. Nice job =)
 
This*Lit*Is*Bananas This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 8:45 pm
Thanks! :)
 
This*Lit*Is*Bananas This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 2:39 pm
lol I totally posted this in the wrong section! I realized as soon as I sent it out for aproval that I'd put it in "Sonnet" instead of "Free Verse". Oh well. :P
 
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