Big Deal

January 20, 2010
By , Livermore, CA
How long did you think I would take it?
How long did you think it would last?
It's time for me to end this-
To put you in my past.
You used to say I was dramatic
You said it was becuase I didn't get my way
I didn't use my voice then-
But now I have something to say
I'm laying in my bed
With this beautiful piece of steel
I'm pulling the trigger to tell you-
Big f***ing deal.

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dreamer_believer said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 11:51 pm
this is a very strong piece. it's almost scary in a sense, but it gets the reader's attention and makes a big impact after you finish reading this. whoa, it's very deep. i do hope your writing makes you feel less depressed....because you are good and have a lot of talent :) wow, bravo!!!
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