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Commandments stone on slave-prince mountain maul
Less pay rebuke from quiet burdens pained
Thy new deems obsolete hath heaven call
Weeping doves cast crimson, edicts inane
Virtuous bride veneer exalting fifth
Wed tender beguil’d hands dearth commonplace
Forsake poor ills cherishing dev’lish sift
Abstract His binding ring; expunge thy grace
Hath said adoration shall relish flaws
Perhaps claimed forth heeding His hail and beck
Yet so accept tragedies, tender claws
Vehement joys s’rrounding thy face and neck?
Discern, breed sheep, elude, lest He appease
Exist no truer words abode of these




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Dancer727 said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 10:41 pm:
Omg christina this is beautiful!
I totally had to read this mag for english, it was so good. I didnt know u could write like this its so pretty
Its sarah btw from camp
 
electrichearts replied...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 8:17 pm :
Thanks, Sarah! It's good to hear from you!
 
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paprika said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 10:06 pm:
I <3 CRISTINAAAAAAA
 
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Funanna said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 9:36 pm:
I LOVE YOU CRISTINA!! :)
 
electrichearts replied...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 8:16 pm :
I LOVE YOU, ANNA! :)
 
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zoethedog said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 9:32 pm:
the vocabulary is eloquent, nice flow, 5 stars
 
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violentstream606 said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 9:28 pm:
almost better than Shakespeare himself
 
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keeeels said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 9:26 pm:
LOVE <3
 
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Ncolre said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 9:12 pm:
Nice job. Very deep
 
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pstro_x said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 8:52 pm:
very, very beautiful
 
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cooldoc said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 2:09 pm:
Fabulous! I love the depth of this sonnet. I really feel the conflict of the abused spouse.
 
electrichearts replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 3:07 pm :
lol, thanks, Mom
 
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