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Commandments stone on slave-prince mountain maul
Less pay rebuke from quiet burdens pained
Thy new deems obsolete hath heaven call
Weeping doves cast crimson, edicts inane
Virtuous bride veneer exalting fifth
Wed tender beguil’d hands dearth commonplace
Forsake poor ills cherishing dev’lish sift
Abstract His binding ring; expunge thy grace
Hath said adoration shall relish flaws
Perhaps claimed forth heeding His hail and beck
Yet so accept tragedies, tender claws
Vehement joys s’rrounding thy face and neck?
Discern, breed sheep, elude, lest He appease
Exist no truer words abode of these



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fragrentt said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 1:41 pm
How gorgeous
 
electrichearts replied...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 8:17 pm
How kind :)
 
carol said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 1:33 pm
Lovely sonnet! You are amazingly talented!
 
electrichearts replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 2:12 pm
Thanks, Carol!
 
nyclover said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 12:25 pm
You are such an amazing writer! Hopefully this will make the magazine! It would be such a wonderful addition! <3
 
electrichearts replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 7:40 pm
You're very kind.
 
jellybean said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 12:23 pm
que bello!!
 
electrichearts replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 3:08 pm
gracias, chiquita <3
 
susie said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 3:44 pm
beautifully written! articulate and graceful!
 
electrichearts replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 7:40 pm
Thank you, Susie!
 
ricci said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 3:40 pm
beautiful sonnet!! great job!!!
 
electrichearts replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 2:14 pm
de nada, ricci! <3
 
Jenny said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 3:37 pm
I didn't get this at first, but then I read your interpretation & loved it. The messge is so raw. Nice!
 
sweetestsymphony said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 3:33 pm
This piece rivals the Bard himself! <3
 
Hermie said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 9:34 am
Beautifully written! You are unbelievable poet.
 
luxy said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 9:33 am
you are a true writer. this sonnet is so touching i almost cried <3
 
ShakespeareRox said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 9:31 am
I LOVE THE OLDE ENGLISH! Keep up the awesome work!
 
nyclover said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 9:30 am
such a touching piece!
 
KERRY said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 7:46 pm
CHRISTINA...YOU ARE AN EXCEPTIONAL WRITER, YOUR SONNET WAS TOUCHING..WE LOOK FORWARD TO MORE OF YOUR WORK IN YEARS TO COME.
 
electrichearts replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 7:41 pm
Thanks for the comment, Kerry!
 
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