Not Another Pair of Feet

January 15, 2010
By KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life isn't a matter of milestones, but of moments"

"experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes."

"be as you wish to seem."

"it's better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not."


I am used
to being stepped
upon
each and everday.
But today
bounded in a surprise
with the sound
of crunching
metal.
No rubber soles
of shoes
could ever be
this heavily hard.
And unlike the feet
this metal didnt
step and go.
Instead, resting upon me
tragically
sat a car
crashed onto me, concrete,
on Roselle Street.


The author's comments:
this was written from a new article about a car crash. the car crashed onto someones front steps, so i wrote this from the perspective of the steps.

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CK310 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2012 at 10:11 pm
CK310 BRONZE, Monsey, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"It is better to be hated for what you are than to be loved for what your not" ~Kurt Cobain

its amazing how you can take a small accident like that and turn it into this! I love it! (especially the perspective:)


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