Beaten

January 14, 2010
By lauren_b SILVER, Flower Mound, Texas
lauren_b SILVER, Flower Mound, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love something set it free, if their meant to be with you, they'll come back"


Beating me, another word to a broken heart
Naturally pressured, required smart.
To afraid to run, while forced, dragged by past.
Eyes stare bleakly, yet pitifully clashed.

We wallow, we scorn, he hit me once more.
I run through my thoughts to look for the door.
My soul, my bitter soul is damaged.
Wipe away my blood, figures, I’m damaged.

I’m finally out, I’m finally free.
The horrors are ticking it just stuck three.
Uncomfortably in public, scared normal.
She’s looking at me! Naked but formal.

Always alone in this world forever.
Experienced, pronounced, evermore clever.


The author's comments:
I had to write this for my class, but its resembling some of the pain that i have endured through my life.

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. said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 10:12 pm
This seems to really reflect how you feel and  what you've been through in your life, it's so touching. Keep it up, don't put down your pen.

liyara GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 4:36 am
liyara GOLD, Sagar, Ohio
13 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
cohere with your soul and things will be cool.

good work keep it up

on Oct. 22 2011 at 12:06 pm
LearnLoveLaugh SILVER, Spokane, Washington
6 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughs would make me cry." by Unknown

Dramatic yet simple. I like it! (:

on Jan. 27 2010 at 5:03 pm
lauren_b SILVER, Flower Mound, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love something set it free, if their meant to be with you, they'll come back"

I'm sorry to hear that, and thank you..

rengeki SILVER said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 9:59 am
rengeki SILVER, Carrollton, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
My past haunts my mind,
My present haunts my body,
And my future lingers in my grave,

i like it, it reminds me of a break up im surviving lol


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