My Love

November 5, 2009
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Open your heart,
Let me inside.
Break those walls,
Lay down your pride.

Open your ears,
Clear your mind.
Simply relax,
Try to unwind.

Open your soul,
Embrace my affection.
There's no more hurting,
No more rejection.

Open your lips,
Link them with mine.
Release your worries,
It'll all be fine.

Open you arms,
Let me in.
Hold me close,
Feel my skin.

Open your eyes,
Look at me.
This is how,
True love should be.

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futurista12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 13, 2015 at 8:31 pm
Could you read my poem called Finding Home? Thank you!
WeAllBurn said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 1:56 pm
awh <3 cute (: read my love sonnet please? :O
GelloBabe said...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 7:54 am
This is really great! (:
ilovewriting95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 9:55 pm
Wow! Great job! That was really pretty!
Claire G. said...
Dec. 24, 2010 at 5:14 pm
oh this makes me hope for a love like that!
ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 5:40 pm
I like this :) wonderful job . Great rhyming by the way . *
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 10:08 pm
Thank u:) personally its one of my favs lol
Ambo123 said...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 9:59 pm
I really love the way those last four lines flow :)
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:36 am
Thank you:) this is my favorite poem lol
*/Chelby* said...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 4:48 pm
This is definetly going on my favs.
i love your poems!(:
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 8:55 am
I'l check out some of ur poems;)
SilverDawn said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 3:17 am
Oh my gawsh. This is going on my favourites! I can see why it's your favourite poem. It's beyond beautiful! You really have talent, you know? I love the rhythm and your rhymes and pattern. Amazing!! Maybe you can check out my poems sometime too? My own fav poem i've written is Tears
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 6:57 pm
Thank u soooo much:) i rly appreciate ur comment n I'm glad to kno someone enjoys the poem as much as i do:) i"ll def check out some of ur poems:)
bluemagnet22 said...
Dec. 4, 2009 at 12:58 pm
This is honestly my favorite poem i have ever written
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