My Love

November 5, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


Open your heart,
Let me inside.
Break those walls,
Lay down your pride.

Open your ears,
Clear your mind.
Simply relax,
Try to unwind.

Open your soul,
Embrace my affection.
There's no more hurting,
No more rejection.

Open your lips,
Link them with mine.
Release your worries,
It'll all be fine.

Open you arms,
Let me in.
Hold me close,
Feel my skin.

Open your eyes,
Look at me.
This is how,
True love should be.

The author's comments:
My boyfriend was going through some really rough times and he began to close himself off to the world around him including me, so I wrote this poem, gave it to him, and had a good talk. The rough times didn't go away but they were easier to deal with while I was holding his hand through it all. Love is amazing. It can do so many things in life...

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 14 comments.


on Aug. 13 2015 at 8:31 pm
futurista12 ELITE, Far Rockaway, New York
615 articles 1 photo 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And though she be but little, she is fierce."- Shakespeare

Could you read my poem called Finding Home? Thank you!

on Jun. 25 2011 at 1:56 pm
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
24 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

awh <3 cute (: read my love sonnet please? :O

on Apr. 19 2011 at 7:54 am
GelloBabe BRONZE, North Versailles, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."

This is really great! (:

on Jan. 12 2011 at 9:55 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

Wow! Great job! That was really pretty!

on Dec. 24 2010 at 5:14 pm
Claire Gallo BRONZE, Safety Harbor, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments
oh this makes me hope for a love like that!

on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:08 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u:) personally its one of my favs lol

on Jun. 30 2010 at 5:40 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

I like this :) wonderful job . Great rhyming by the way . *

on Jun. 21 2010 at 11:36 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you:) this is my favorite poem lol

Ambo123 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 9:59 pm
Ambo123 BRONZE, Hillsboro, Oregon
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two musicians playing together, there is nothing more beautiful.
-John Frusicante

I really love the way those last four lines flow :)

on Dec. 15 2009 at 8:55 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx:)

I'l check out some of ur poems;)

/Chelby said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 4:48 pm
/Chelby, Yatahey, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can a heart still break if its already stopped beating..?

This is definetly going on my favs.

i love your poems!(:

<3

on Dec. 11 2009 at 6:57 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u soooo much:) i rly appreciate ur comment n I'm glad to kno someone enjoys the poem as much as i do:) i"ll def check out some of ur poems:)

on Dec. 11 2009 at 3:17 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
10 articles 0 photos 298 comments
Oh my gawsh. This is going on my favourites! I can see why it's your favourite poem. It's beyond beautiful! You really have talent, you know? I love the rhythm and your rhymes and pattern. Amazing!! Maybe you can check out my poems sometime too? My own fav poem i've written is Tears

on Dec. 4 2009 at 12:58 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

This is honestly my favorite poem i have ever written


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!