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Anguish

By , East Hanover, NJ
You tug my heart,
you yank my soul,
the hatred grows,
my life you stole,
I trust no more,
For this you've done,
I've lost all love
and now i run,
from open arms
I've never seen,
from your disease
with no vaccine,
there is no hope
for us inside,
there's no one else
to be my guide,
I am detached,
my path unknown,
your mind games which
I have outgrown,
for I have given
all my strength,
and I have reached
pat life's length,
I walk alone,
never followed,
with no trust,
my heart is hollowed.



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HazyeyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 9:33 pm:
I LOVE THIS POEM!! it is so sincere and has a lot of feeling! great writing, truely inspirational!! PS. pretty, pretty please check out my work!!
 
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Desti_B said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 9:08 pm:
Oh! lol...LOVE it :) 
 
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Lexie96 said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 10:25 pm:
Really like this, check out my work sometime? Please?
 
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ShenelleCrystal said...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 2:44 pm:

this is VERY nice ! I loved every liene <3 .

Check my work please ? =] It would mean so much . *

 
ShenelleCrystal replied...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 2:44 pm :
line * sorry I messed up
 
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sunnyhunny This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 8:15 pm:
Beautiful!  Great flow.
 
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iWriteToExpressThouqhts said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 11:03 am:

fantastic work ! great ryhming as well . great job :]

please check out my work

 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 11:04 am :
rhyming * sorry I messed up
 
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isabel18 said...
May 21, 2010 at 1:17 pm:
Great work!!
 
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sambamthankyoumam said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 6:36 pm:
"I've lost all love and now i run, from open arms ive never seem from you disease with no vaccine" is to me the most amazing part of this poem. i loved it.
 
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bamboom212 said...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 8:14 pm:
wow blue's right. this hits u right in the chest. truly breathtaking. Awesome job :)
 
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bluemagnet22 said...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 3:27 pm:
Wow this hits you in the heart when you read it... its sooo real and vivid! Amazing work!
 
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betrayalhurts said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 8:53 am:
that's really cool it relates with what's going on with me lately so I like it
 
Tybalt replied...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 4:20 pm :
I think it is good. I would suggest breaking it into verses just because its kind of like a run on. Do understand that I am not an english teacher when I say this though, so if its your style to write like this, by all means do so.
 
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