October 29, 2009
The first time I see you, I pass you by,
Weeks fly away, everything changes day to day,
September begins and I cannot lie, I allow myself to fall all the way,

You vanish for awhile, leave me to think,
Arrival, perfect still, second glance leaves more thirst,
I ask you to dance, No you durst not drink
The heady libations of love immersed,

Time changes me and you, I let you chase
Me, but the world won't wait and I find myself in your starlit eyes in a face
That I will never forget, I was so blind,

You stare down at me, hold me in your arms
I kiss my heart goodbye, give into your charms.

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FluffeeKittee said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 8:59 pm
I like the emotion, but I was wondering why you cut it short to 12 lines. Why the break with tradition?
The_Word_Fairy replied...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 7:41 pm
Thank you! Well its actually ment to be 14 lines, however there were a few places where I didn't format it correctly and lines didn't get separated. For example where it says : I allow myself to fall all the way,
That should have been moved down a line, but it still gives the same general idea and feeling I hope! :)
bluemagnet22 said...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 3:39 pm
Love... isn't it great!
Cherie777 said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 7:06 pm
whoooo I loooovee it =] you write so well
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