October 20, 2009
Custom User Avatar
More by this author
No one cared to find,
All the hurt behind her eyes.
Everyone thought she was happy,
They were blinded by her lies.
They never saw the pain,
Yet they saw the false perfection.
Secretly she craved love,
All she wanted was simple affection.
Sadly no one showed concern,
As she slipped down the drain.
She just wanted someone to care,
Yet they kept ignoring her pain.
She couldn't live with herself anymore,
So she decided to quit and fail.
One day when she was all alone,
She took a deadly cocktail.
Her friends were all stunned in shock,
It broke her family's heart.
But little did they know,
They could have prevented it from the start.
Everyone thought she had it all,
But that lie only lasted for awhile.
Her disguise no longer worked,
Without her pretty,little smile.

Join the Discussion

This article has 29 comments. Post your own now!

DreamWriter15 said...
Mar. 25, 2010 at 7:11 pm
So sad....and so realistic. Feels familiar too, because I think we all have our "pretty little smiles" we hide behind. Five stars for you, my friend!
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 5:00 pm
thank u...ya sadly we all have a mask we choose to hide behind and for most it's our smile..but thank u so much for ur comment!
DreamWriter15 replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 2:15 pm
:) any time
ann@@@ said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 2:52 pm
this poem is fantastic exxpress real feelings
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 1:22 pm
thank you so much:)
aydenblack This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 4:25 pm
I really liked this, it something I can completely relate to, on more than one level.
Keep writing; you have great potential :]
lamzy said...
Oct. 31, 2009 at 8:42 am
wow thats a very great poem. sad but true.. keep up the good work! :)
Alexx627 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 2:35 pm
Awe this is a sad poem:( I almost wanted to cry...but it's vry well written with great flow...keep up the good work:)
bluemagnet22 replied...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 11:34 am
Thanx:) I appreciate the comment;)
Site Feedback