October 16, 2009
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When you waked in the room,
You immediately caught my eye.
I couldn't help but stare,
I'm not going to lie.

There was an instant attraction,
That I'd never felt before.
Every time you looked at me,
I always craved for more.

When we talked, my words would jumble,
I couldn't find the right thing to say.
My voice would quiver, my knees would shake,
You simply took my breath away.

Every time you were around,
I would trip over my own two feet.
Each time your hand held mine,
My heart would skip a beat.

Now that we're together,
Thoughts of you fill my day.
Every time you kiss me,
My worries drift away.

I look forward to our future,
Making new memories as we go.
Sharing all the simple pleasures,
Together as we grow.

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ElizabethHolt said...
Apr. 27, 2012 at 9:48 am

This is GREATTT! I loved it!!! the ryhming made it 10x betterrr!!!!! AWESOME JOB!


Tobbie Z. said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 10:10 pm
Nice work on the poem. it really has a lot of emotion built into it. Keep it up!
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:08 am
Thanx:) i appreciate ur opinion!
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 1:38 pm
love it! :) very sweet and pure. great job! :)
bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 10:45 am
The first line is suposed to be "when you walked in the room" sry!
Lixxy_93 replied...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 1:58 am
amazing! i love it, it sounds so sweet and innocent just like true love should always be <3
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