Ever So Faithful

October 12, 2009
Come near to me so I can share,
A secret that is rare,
Bound by truth,
Just as Ruth,
Ever so faithful,
I will share this tale so charmful,
And truly divine,
It will not fail to shine,
As a beacon on a hill,
Bringing the world to stand still,
Of a wonderful gift,
That promised to lift,
Our burden of sin,
That in the end did win,
Our souls over to Him,
We do not accept it as just a whim,
But with all of our heart soul and mind,
We choose to accept it as a bind,
To our Heavenly Father,
That through no other,
Then of His perfect Son,
The impossible could be done,
That death could be defeated,
So that his love could be completed,
In a most amazing way,
To cause a heart to sway,
A spirit to renew,
If only you believe it’s true,
Then listen when I say,
That there will be a day,
When all else fails,
And faith unveils,
The true believer,
Who He will deliver,
At the end,
Just around the bend,
Not before the tares,
As they declare,
But after all is passed,
Then shall the last trumpet blast,
Announcing the Lord‘s return,
For the waiting bride he beckoned
Which forever held true,
Though they are so few,
Forever He will hold them dear,
Because for Him they stayed pure

…but he that endureth to the end shall be saved. Matthew 10:22

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Alabian said...
Sept. 5, 2013 at 9:12 pm
Totally 5 stars! You've got this completely right! I am a Christian and if I weren't, I'd be totally converted, haha! Great writing, great words!
laurentw said...
May 14, 2012 at 8:48 pm
And btw, you inspired me to upload a couple poems of my own which I wrote a while ago.
laurentw said...
May 14, 2012 at 8:42 pm
Thank you so much! :) That was very encouraging to me. 5/5 stars for you!
M2coolTodd said...
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Kate298 said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 3:40 pm
That was so beautiful :) I hope one day I can write something so amazing like that to share my belief with others.
lostlove45 said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 11:49 pm

i love it i am a christan and you did such a good job :)


Lola_Black said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 8:44 pm
Beautiful! It's things like this that remind me why I'm a Christian. God bless!
jshawts said...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 1:53 pm
Wow, this is lovely! :) Great job. Although I am not Christian, you described your faith so beautifully. Amazing job :D
Orangepenguin said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 1:27 pm
This poem is powerful and so beautifully written.
zankthetank replied...
Sept. 15, 2011 at 12:52 pm
cool! love it
BlackMoonWhiteSky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 3:01 pm
Lovely poem, quite enjoyable.
Dominicano_Loco said...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 12:01 pm
Enjoyable. :) thank you for posting this.
ricky said...
Sept. 28, 2010 at 11:30 am
this is not cool....did i mension i want to bomb china.....
kandace said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 12:46 pm
i think that ur work is wonderful maybe you could look at mine and give me some pointers
CassieSherman14 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 30, 2010 at 7:20 pm
Wow! That was great! I loved it and I'm a Christian too!
shafer15 said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 9:45 pm
Holy Crow I have just been totaly and completely converted!! =) Wonderfully written
distant_dreamer said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 3:22 pm
I LOVE this, if this poem can't win people to Christ , I don't know what will! Lol ;) I love every bit of it! Very touching!!!!! 5 stars!
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 4:53 am
i love it. it is powerful, really.
please check me out and leave a comment and rate if you wish. thanks!
jamesb101 replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 8:52 pm
u is so positive i love dat
Pensivegurl said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 5:26 pm
I absolutely adore it! >.< Keep writing and I shall do the same!
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