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Take my Heart and Break It

October 11, 2009
By jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."


Take my broken heart,
and rip it from my chest.
Steal away my soul,
and finally put me to rest.

I dreamt about you day and night,
and I wanted you to be mine.
You watched me in my hardest days,
and sometimes you watched me shine.

Every time I saw you,
my heart would skip a beat.
Every time you said my name,
I would spring out of my seat.

I loved you with my heart and soul.
I loved you year after year.
But something always kept us apart:
our confusion, our chances, our fear.

But now there is no hope for us,
we are doomed to be apart.
Maybe I won't feel the pain
if you completely break my heart.


The author's comments:
Most of the time relationships grow from the innocence of a best friend. This is my poem explaining how it feels to realize that. This is also to express the awful truth when you discover that you can never be together.

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on Mar. 10 2011 at 10:04 pm
Bren_Bren BRONZE, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
If you stand for nothing you will fall for anything

I really do agree with you on that...... check out my poem and tell me what you think

on Mar. 10 2011 at 10:01 pm
Bren_Bren BRONZE, Memphis, Tennessee
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you stand for nothing you will fall for anything

When I read your poem I can actually make a connection with what you were saying........ I really love this poem because I can truely relate to it!! check out my poem and let me kno what you think

on Mar. 4 2011 at 2:23 pm
MiscellanyCrop DIAMOND, Middlefield, Ohio
50 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let Earth unbalanced from her orbit fly / Planets and Suns run lawless through the sky.
An Essay on Man - Alexander Pope

Love! So relatable. Great poem. (:

Rox18 SILVER said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 3:51 pm
Rox18 SILVER, Riverside, California
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this rhyme scheme is amazing the way the poem sounds in rhythm and in tune is well done. and the emotion felt is poewrful. goodjob :]

Ria Clarl <3 said...
on Feb. 28 2011 at 4:51 pm
Hi, i just wanted to inform you that you did an excellent job on th sonnet poem.  It really touched me & made me come to realize that people get heartbroken all the time but you just have too let whomever out of your life. ***** (5 stars)

on Feb. 10 2011 at 2:39 pm
Emily Hipsak BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Beautiful work. (:

cookiecrepes said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 1:26 pm
I love it!! Everyone goes through this no matter who...i uset to never want to hear that a person you like isnt good enough for you, but now i cant take it and no problem

on Jan. 19 2011 at 1:14 pm
I just love love love this poem! keep writing because you are so great

on Jan. 19 2011 at 9:59 am
KingReject SILVER, Gueydan, Louisiana
9 articles 0 photos 24 comments
I feel exactly the same at the moment....five stars.

Jones said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 5:47 pm
Jones, Spotsylvania, Virginia
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hey

This was so interesting for me to read, I loved it! The emotion behind it is very authentic and raw, and that makes for some of the very greatest literature. It is also relatable for the meaning, and understandable. Thank you for sharing your work! im in a band and i wrote a song similar to this the other day called take this heart and sell it!

on Dec. 28 2010 at 7:56 pm
alymarie3 PLATINUM, Leavenworth, Kansas
24 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Piglet: How do you spell love?
Pooh: You don't spell it, you feel it

Um, AMAZING! That's all i have to say!

on Dec. 21 2010 at 1:29 pm
Elizabeth-Martin PLATINUM, Georgetown, Massachusetts
21 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives me a reason to cry, I'll show life that I have 1000 reasons to smile.

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this one. so sad and heartfelt, I could feel every word. I love this write. Keep writing. 

on Dec. 17 2010 at 6:16 pm
justsmileanddance PLATINUM, Montgomery, Alabama
28 articles 42 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
-Albus Dumbledore

this is exactly how i feel!! thank you so much for putting my feelings into words when i couldn't!!

on Dec. 13 2010 at 3:09 pm
TrickrTreat GOLD, Fowlerville, Michigan
19 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you're good at something, never do it for free." -The Dark Knight

This is so beautiful! I love it and I can realate to it in so many ways, i absolutely love this

on Dec. 10 2010 at 1:55 pm
Halabella BRONZE, Longview, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Quote the raven nevermore . . .\\\"

Awww! I almost cried reading this and I think it was perfect!

Duckie430 said...
on Nov. 22 2010 at 9:14 am
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

this is very good, alot of emotion, & it is evident you put alot of work into writing this. good job!

on Nov. 21 2010 at 10:32 am
aphilly DIAMOND, St. Paul Park, Minnesota
63 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Have you ever once in your life reached out to touch infinity?" -Ellen Hopkins

I love your style of writing. your so creative and honest. I really like it :)

SideraCaeli said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 7:23 pm

I love this! 

It is wonderful. Relates to me, and has  a good meter. Enjoyable. Good Job


on Nov. 14 2010 at 6:45 pm
sabina22 BRONZE, Glen Mills, Pennsylvania
1 article 0 photos 47 comments
This was so interesting for me to read, I loved it! The emotion behind it is very authentic and raw, and that makes for some of the very greatest literature. It is also relatable for the meaning, and understandable. Thank you for sharing your work! =)

gozochrissie said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:10 am
gozochrissie, Cleveland, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the wise man is not he who thinks he knows everything, but he who knows he knows nothing"....

very nice!!!n  i can feel the emotion of wanting to move on very clever!


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