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We set ourselves apart,
We seal our ears,
And close our hearts.
We sin their sin,
Yet we ignore the burden,
And hide it within.
We claim to care,
Still we hide the gift,
We were meant to share.
We refuse to obey,
We deny our purpose,
And push God away.
Our hearts need to break,
For all the lost souls,
We can't just forsake.



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IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 7:40 pm
ReaLly beautiful!! Please check out my poems! I think this will help, way to go!
 
WeAllBurn said...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 12:17 pm
what an amazing piece of work <3
 
Crystal326 said...
Oct. 25, 2010 at 12:45 pm

This is Amazing!!

. & it really ecouraged me.

Thanks :)

 
numbheart21 said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 4:40 am
this is great! I really like your writing.. please continue your works! haha..:D tc..:)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 2:02 pm
Thank u so much!
 
Joyful_angel said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 11:32 pm
this is very good!! like i always say, u have tru talent
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 11:50 am
Thanx:) n u do too!
 
Joyful_angel replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 9:22 pm
thanks!!! and that opinion will never change
 
Vilhelm said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 10:48 pm
This really speaks to a lot of what I've been feeling. Thank you!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 12:22 pm
Ur welcome:)
I'm glad you can relate to it:)
Thanx for ur comment;)
 
becky said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 3:07 pm
What a wonderful testomony from a young women. How great it would be if more of our youth would think like this. God Bless you and keep up the good work!!
 
mrsabbyjonas13 said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 1:24 pm
This is outstanding. Very eye-opening! I'm a Catholic, so it's powerful to read something like this and know that there are other people out there who long to spread God's word with everyone, but just haven't found a way to do it yet. This is awesome, keep writing! :)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 12:54 pm
Thank you so much
I really appreciate your feedback!
God bless you:)
 
Tammi said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 11:59 am
How true... Today too many people are more concerned with being politically correct, than the souls that are dying & going to  hell . It's encouraging to know there are some concerned people left. Keep writing & keep WITNESSING. You have a gift...continue using it.
 
~Corrii~ said...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 11:03 am
Vry good...it gave me chills Janell! how do you do it lol?!? I wish i could write!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 11:07 am
idk lol u just need to pick up a pen n paper n try! lol
 
unbreakable said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:25 pm
i like this one..it tells a very true story...good job....
 
Alexx627 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 2:43 pm
Vry nice...well written like everyone of your others poem...you're vry talented!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:37 am
Hey Alexx whats up?
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:45 am
I haven't talked to you in forever!
 
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