Senses of Winter

October 8, 2009
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I stare out the window,
On a cold winter day.
Watching little specks of snow,
Float on the ground to stay.

The smell of crisp winter air,
Fills the sky around.
The snow's layer doesn't share.
A blade of grass can't be found.

Calming silence fills my ears,
Peace is all around.
The only thing I can hear,
Is snow falling to the ground.

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coldriversnow said...
Nov. 9, 2016 at 7:46 am
who can tell me what's the meaning of this sentense:"The snow's layer doesn't share."
KMG28 said...
Jun. 3, 2016 at 7:43 pm
This is a very peaceful poem. Remember these sensations now so when you are an adult, you can look back at it and smile.
TheComet said...
Sept. 27, 2014 at 8:20 am
I think we have this in commun, I love winter season ^_^ Your poem is just amazing and marvelous, you described it so well that I could feel the cold and see the snow though it's still sunny now :P you have an incredible talent. Keep it up and let the world be amazed by your writing skill ^_^ Thank you for sharing this.
elfiewrites said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 3:18 pm
I am in love with this poem. Your word choice is amazing! Please, if you get the chance, give me feedback on my newest article "Is There Reason?" Much appreciated and keep up the good work!
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:04 pm

Thank you:)

I'll totally check out your poem:)

bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:04 pm
haha I realized it wasn't a poem lol well I check out ur work lol
Kaylamic said...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 12:44 pm
i love this! great word choice :)
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 8:56 am
Thanx so much:)
mrsabbyjonas13 said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 2:34 pm
This is nicely written. Good job! :) I'm also a snow! I can't wait for Christmas so this is really a fun piece to read!
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 12:55 pm
Me too lol I'm counting the days down till Christmas gets here =)
paixaam said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 1:57 pm
well written! it create such a wonderful image of serenity and comfort.
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:03 am
thanx:) i appreciate ur comment
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 1:36 pm
love it! :) i can picture winter easily when i read this. the rhythm is great! bravo :) check out some of my work if you can, i would love your opinion
Inkspired said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 7:20 pm
That's cute. I really like this one. You wrote this really well, I can almost see it!
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