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I stare out the window,
On a cold winter day.
Watching little specks of snow,
Float on the ground to stay.

The smell of crisp winter air,
Fills the sky around.
The snow's layer doesn't share.
A blade of grass can't be found.

Calming silence fills my ears,
Peace is all around.
The only thing I can hear,
Is snow falling to the ground.



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elfiewrites said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 3:18 pm:
I am in love with this poem. Your word choice is amazing! Please, if you get the chance, give me feedback on my newest article "Is There Reason?" Much appreciated and keep up the good work!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:04 pm :

Thank you:)

I'll totally check out your poem:)

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:04 pm :
haha I realized it wasn't a poem lol well I check out ur work lol
 
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Kaylamic said...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 12:44 pm:
i love this! great word choice :)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 8:56 am :
Thanx so much:)
 
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mrsabbyjonas13 said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 2:34 pm:
This is nicely written. Good job! :) I'm also a snow bunny..lol! I can't wait for Christmas so this is really a fun piece to read!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 12:55 pm :
Me too lol I'm counting the days down till Christmas gets here =)
 
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paixaam said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 1:57 pm:
well written! it create such a wonderful image of serenity and comfort.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:03 am :
thanx:) i appreciate ur comment
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 1:36 pm:
love it! :) i can picture winter easily when i read this. the rhythm is great! bravo :) check out some of my work if you can, i would love your opinion
 
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Inkspired said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 7:20 pm:
That's cute. I really like this one. You wrote this really well, I can almost see it!
 
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