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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 2:20 pm:
It was a very touching poem!!! I relate to as well. Great job! i just wrote two stories called nightstalker and the beast. If any of u read them please post comments if u liked them or not or if i should change anything. Thanks! :D
 
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dreamerz said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 10:09 pm:

Wow... I love this. I don't know what to say. Great job doesn't cover it... 

Would you check out my poem, Change, that I just posted on my ElleNicole screen name/account? I am new to Teenink and I really need feedback. Thanks! 

 
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Loverboy12 said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 11:39 pm:
I like this piece of work alot simply because it moves me .  I read it and i can see myself in your place.  Thank you for posting it.
 
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raidersrock08 said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 9:11 pm:

this is amazing this relates to soo many friendships and i would like to say it relates to my life, such a good

poem

 

 
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LoveMeSoDear said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 1:21 pm:
This explains me so well =/
 
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shays said...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 12:29 pm:
short sweet n straight to the point! i like this poem it gav me goose bumps. i sure everyone experienced sumthing lik this gud job!
 
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funinthesun45 said...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 3:44 pm:
This is such a well writen Poem. This is so true how people change and you have no idea what is wrong with them. I know how that is. Your poem probably relates to everyone who reads this. GOOD JOB!
 
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katherinetwizzee said...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 8:42 pm:
This is excelent. I love your poetry. Its exactly the way I would've put it.
 
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RanaHewezi1998This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 5:59 pm:
that was fsntastic!!!!!!!! i've been through dat same situation n it hurts  ore when u can't help!
 
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WriteToLive said...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 11:54 am:
I can totally relate, this was amazing!
 
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undone said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 1:07 pm:
this was ANAZINGLY awsome!!
 
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KaitlynElizabeth said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 12:16 pm:
I absolutely LOVE this! :)
 
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sammiexoxo said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 1:07 pm:
Really good<3
 
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Youngshakespeare18 said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 2:46 pm:
Amazing, and captivateing!
 
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ArianaNightengale said...
May 30, 2011 at 9:54 am:
Yeah, people changing like that really makes a person wonder, doesn't it? Loved your leaf metaphor. It's a great poem :)
 
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DarkAngelNinjaXP said...
May 20, 2011 at 9:35 am:
Wow. This is really moving.
 
DD05 :) replied...
May 20, 2011 at 10:05 am :

your so right about your comment...

 

 
Makenzi B. replied...
May 20, 2011 at 2:54 pm :
yeah i totally know what you mean:) loved your poem:-p
 
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emmatoga02 said...
May 17, 2011 at 3:06 pm:
This is amazing! I really know how you feel. I've been in that situation before.
 
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featherssss said...
May 13, 2011 at 3:31 pm:
this is my favorite poem i've read today, it remind me of my ex boyfriend and my best friend the two people that i was closest to in september, both of them have lost who they are because of drugs. its very depressing
 
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