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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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stillheartless This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 11:06 pm:
I cannot believe how well this explains last summer for me. This is trully stupendous.
 
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Lexie96 said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 9:53 pm:
I love this so much... it's beautiful. If anyone has time would they mind checking out my poem... I'd sure appreciate it if you could! Please and thank you
 
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EscapeSanity said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 8:29 pm:
I love this poem! It relates to everyone and really gives the feeling of whats going on. I enjoyed this poem. :)
 
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horsewriter4evr said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 7:36 pm:
Wow this is really great! It just shows how people change almost all the time.
 
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RachaelSt said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 1:16 pm:
i like pie
 
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DeAunna said...
Oct. 14, 2011 at 10:48 am:

Very relatable, and I love the transition from points of view, has a good flow to it, and a nice topic. I really like it a lot :)

 

 
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CandyGirl636 said...
Oct. 12, 2011 at 4:56 am:

This is a very nice poem. I like how everyone can relate to it.

~If someone want's to give me some feedback on my work, I would like that greatly. :) Thanks

 
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mhafner said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 9:36 pm:
I like that you wrote a poem that relates to everyday teenage lives. We all know of somebody who has changed and you always look back at how they used to be and when you write about something that people can relate to it's a lot more enjoyable and more readers will listen. This is a simple, and beautiful poem.
 
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purpleink said...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 9:00 pm:
wow, i can really relate to this. it's so true! love it! (if anyone could give me some much needed feedback I'd really appreciate it-thanks!)
 
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Cianni P. said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 9:26 am:
Nice poem it sounds like you miss someone in your life and i do too. my best friend i relate to you.
 
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OG_kingdrizzy said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 10:41 am:

this poem is very understanding because this kind of stuff happens all the time

 

 
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originalpadawon25 said...
Oct. 2, 2011 at 3:31 am:
that was amazing 
 
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Rosie_1030 said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 7:38 pm:
This descibes the situation i'm in right now perfectly!! I lovee it! (:
 
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Ha ha said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 6:45 pm:
It made no sense its not interested.
 
originalpadawon25 replied...
Oct. 2, 2011 at 3:30 am :
read it again 
 
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ILY99 said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 3:03 am:
This is so touching i really like what u did with it
 
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EmiliePhillippi said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 7:19 am:
Wow. Exactly what I'm going through RIGHT NOW! its a great poem, thank you for sharing!
 
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Lctrewyn said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 10:38 am:
i love this .
 
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Gilbert, said...
Sept. 17, 2011 at 12:27 pm:
That is so true...time ages and people change
 
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paigeturner9 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 17, 2011 at 12:11 pm:
this is amazing! So sad, but so well written :)
 
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