You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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Kat127 SILVER said...
on Jan. 2 2010 at 6:11 pm
Kat127 SILVER, East Northport, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes you have to let people go, in order to realize how much you love them"

This is exactly how i feel right now.My friend has changed so much and i feel like hes gone forever now.This was really great

on Jan. 2 2010 at 11:14 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awe thanx:)

I'm glad my poem meant something to you:)

I'm sorry about your friiend tho...it's so hard to keep a good friendship when someones moved

on Jan. 2 2010 at 11:13 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

i'm glad lol i try to make my poems understandable!lol;)

on Jan. 2 2010 at 11:12 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awe thanx:)

don't tear up too much lol

on Dec. 30 2009 at 3:17 pm
G.M.Palacio SILVER, Bayamon, Other
6 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect. It means you've decide to see beyond the imperfections.

I can completely relate to this. I miss my friend dearly since he moved. But he's changed. This poem has summed up pretty much whole relationship with since he moved. Truly wonderful.

on Dec. 28 2009 at 9:39 pm
HanaMizz14 GOLD, Auburn, Washington
15 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be happy because you'll never know when an EMT will be listening to your heart not beat.

Wow, i completely understand that.

on Dec. 28 2009 at 3:05 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
SO moving! you are amazingly talented. it makes me want to cry. (the poem.)

Jacee007 GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2009 at 8:24 pm
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
13 articles 6 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Today is the Tomorrow you were worrying about Yesterday. The journey of a lifetime begins with one single step. Negativity is the downfall of dreams. It's not the quantity of friends that matters it's the quality.

wow very moving

on Dec. 27 2009 at 7:29 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

you should submit some work:)

on Dec. 27 2009 at 7:27 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you very much:)

My poems always mean more to me when people can relate...my whole purpose behind writing is to make a difference in lives whether its one life or one thousand...so I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem:D

jimmy_a GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2009 at 2:55 am
jimmy_a GOLD, Sanford, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Look for me, not with a flashlight but open your heart n free your soul n there my love i shall be

what a great poem its really deep i can def relate really gud job!

on Dec. 26 2009 at 11:47 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

thanx:) i try to translate my emotions into words to so my poems have true meaningful feelings and i glad you could see that:)

on Dec. 26 2009 at 11:43 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you so much!

Your opinion is very encouraging:)

It always makes me feel so wonderful to know that what I write can touch someone!

Thank you again:) I'll def read n rate ur work:)

on Dec. 23 2009 at 2:37 pm
Robkingett PLATINUM, Tallahassee, Florida
24 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was little they called me a liar, but now I'm grown up, they call me a writer.

I seriously have no idea why this poem was not published elsewhere! Oh my god! This poem touched me ever so much! I can imagine why so many people would relate to this! This poem was the best I have read all day. Kudos to you

on Dec. 19 2009 at 9:22 am
GreenIvy BRONZE, Queen Creek, Arizona
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wow the feelings you used have a very strong meaning. I really enjoyed that. keep up the great work!

AmnyR BRONZE said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 9:24 pm
AmnyR BRONZE, Clifton, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 134 comments

Favorite Quote:
To the world, you may be just one person, but to one person, you may be the whole world. ~unknown

no problem, read mine and vote on it if you get a chance!

on Dec. 11 2009 at 6:52 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I love to hear peoples opinions thanx for commenting:))

on Dec. 11 2009 at 6:51 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I'm so glad pple can relate to my poem

thank you for ur comment:)

on Dec. 11 2009 at 6:50 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u so much i appreciate ur comment:))

on Dec. 10 2009 at 2:51 pm
xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
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so simple, but yet, so powerful.


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