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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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GreenIvy said...
Dec. 19, 2009 at 9:22 am:
wow the feelings you used have a very strong meaning. I really enjoyed that. keep up the great work!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 11:47 am :
thanx:) i try to translate my emotions into words to so my poems have true meaningful feelings and i glad you could see that:)
 
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AmnyR said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 9:24 pm:
no problem, read mine and vote on it if you get a chance!
 
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Gazellarendra said...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 2:51 pm:
so simple, but yet, so powerful.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 6:52 pm :
I love to hear peoples opinions thanx for commenting:))
 
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AmnyR said...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 8:55 pm:
i can totally relate, and beautifully written!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 6:51 pm :
I'm so glad pple can relate to my poem
thank you for ur comment:)
 
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Mandilee said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 9:01 pm:
Wow! I can so relate in many different situations! I love this, so simple yet such a message. And it makes you think. Wonderful! Keep writing!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 6:50 pm :
Thank u so much i appreciate ur comment:))
 
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Diana12 said...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 7:14 pm:
Your writing speaks your mind! I enjoyed reading your poem its amazing and very touchful. Keep it up, better things will come to you!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 12:45 pm :
Thank you so much:)
I'm glad you enjoyed it;)
And I appreciate your opinion:))
 
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Volleygirl25 said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 7:30 pm:
Oh my i love this! i so can relate and i absolutely love it. The words flow together beautifully.
 
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toriLou said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 4:42 pm:
This is amazing i drew me in just with the first line!! keep it up!
 
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Joyful_angel said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 10:43 pm:
WOW~~ i love this poem and i caan totally relate!! i have a poem called "Dont Blink" i culd use feed back~
ur poem was AWESOME!!! keep writting
 
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gabigal said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 6:06 pm:
i love this..it resembles my life..im the same..he's not...awesomness!!!!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 1:51 pm :
Thank you!
I alway like known someone can relate to my poems! :)
I checked out some of ur poems ;) n they are rly nice:)
 
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kpf1991 said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 11:48 am:
How this is amazing! it was a great expression of change and maturity within life's journey. Yet, you also showed the constant things in life which tied everything together! AMAZING!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 9:23 am :
Thanx:)
I'm glad you enjoyed;)
I like ur stuff also:)
 
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Rkingett This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 1:07 pm:
OMG! this poem is the best! wow! it's a shame it didn't make i in the mgizine. i love the first stanza the best.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 1:12 pm :
Thank You! ;)
Ya I wonder what they looking for sometimes lol all of my fav poems on her aren't in the magazine! lol
Ur poems and stories are really great too:)
 
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CaseyLeigh This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 9:33 pm:
This poem is amazing. I don't think there's a person who hasn't seen such change, been through such an experience.
 
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