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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.




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Volleygirl25 said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 7:30 pm:
Oh my i love this! i so can relate and i absolutely love it. The words flow together beautifully.
 
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toriLou said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 4:42 pm:
This is amazing i drew me in just with the first line!! keep it up!
 
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Joyful_angel said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 10:43 pm:
WOW~~ i love this poem and i caan totally relate!! i have a poem called "Dont Blink" i culd use feed back~
ur poem was AWESOME!!! keep writting
 
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gabigal said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 6:06 pm:
i love this..it resembles my life..im the same..he's not...awesomness!!!!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 1:51 pm :
Thank you!
I alway like known someone can relate to my poems! :)
I checked out some of ur poems ;) n they are rly nice:)
 
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kpf1991 said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 11:48 am:
How this is amazing! it was a great expression of change and maturity within life's journey. Yet, you also showed the constant things in life which tied everything together! AMAZING!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 9:23 am :
Thanx:)
I'm glad you enjoyed;)
I like ur stuff also:)
 
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Rkingett This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 1:07 pm:
OMG! this poem is the best! wow! it's a shame it didn't make i in the mgizine. i love the first stanza the best.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 1:12 pm :
Thank You! ;)
Ya I wonder what they looking for sometimes lol all of my fav poems on her aren't in the magazine! lol
Ur poems and stories are really great too:)
 
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CaseyLeigh This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 9:33 pm:
This poem is amazing. I don't think there's a person who hasn't seen such change, been through such an experience.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 11:45 am :
Thank you:)
Change either makes ya or breaks ya
 
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Marie92 said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 9:32 am:
Aww... my friends been through this. Its a great poem.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 11:51 am :
Thanx for ur comment i appreciate it:)
 
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choirchicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 8:46 pm:
i liked this poem. it was really good
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 11:50 am :
Thanks:):)
 
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Kaity.. said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 10:03 am:
I loved this pome...my brothers birthday is in september he died 6 years ago it is deff one on my fav pomes now ..thank you
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 11:49 am :
Awe I'm sorry :(
I'm glad my poem could touch ur heart.
I write for others as much as I write for myself.
 
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samm987 said...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 3:42 pm:
Nice poem i like it
 
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~Corrii~ said...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:55 am:
Awe this is a sweet but sad poem:( but anyways how r u? long time no hear!lol
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:57 am :
busy! lol i gotta start using a planner or somethin! lol
 
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