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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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berry said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 3:35 pm
hey this is hot keep up the good work
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:45 pm

Well thank u:) 

lol I've never had anyone tell me my poem was hot before so thanx

 
Ghada.Q. said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 12:54 pm

This is sooo sweet. It'd be a great song too!

Do check out my work too if you can :)

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:44 pm
Thank u;) n I'll def check out ur work;);)
 
Metree This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 11:33 am
wow i love this! I'm trying to get one published called Brick Wall that I submitted about a week and a half ago that hasn't passed through the editors yet that is JUST like this and I know exactly how you must feel because the same thing happened with one of my really close friends and she's totally not the same person anymore
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:43 pm

Thanx:)

Well deff let me kno when it goes through cuz I totally wana read it;)

 
BriannaKaye13 said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 1:48 pm
Wow! This is amazing! Keep up the good work! (:
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:42 pm
Thank u vry much
 
Medieval_Maiden03 said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 2:41 pm
I love it!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:42 pm
I do too lol n thank u:)
 
Jacee007 said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 1:09 pm

Wow what talent:)

No matter how many times I read this poem it never gets old!

I love it

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:42 pm
Thank u so much:)
 
jonas_chic899 said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 5:11 pm

dude i love it!!

 

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:40 pm
dude thanx!!!! =D
 
elfiewrites said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 8:02 pm
I love this, and totally agree with it! Keep on writing! If you get the chance, may you PLEASE comment on my work, too? Thanks so much
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:40 pm

Thanx a bunch!

Ya I'll totally read n comment on ur work;)

 
Johaa said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 5:53 pm
I love your work! It's like the third time i read this! I would really like it if you gave your opinion in a chapter i posted here ^^
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:39 pm
thank u!!!! I'll def read it n comment!
 
leejeanstar said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 6:07 pm
i love it! i wish it was longer though. your a great author.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:25 pm
thank u again!
lol i kinda wish it was longer too lol
 
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