You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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on Apr. 29 2010 at 7:34 am
princess4ever BRONZE, Tripoli, Other
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i can really relate to this poem!!! love it

 


on Apr. 27 2010 at 12:18 pm
Tshabarrsgirl SILVER, Dexter, Michigan
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The way to heaven is on horseback.

This is so good! I loved it! It has an amzing flow! You're very talented!

Nyrihaz said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 9:34 pm
Nyrihaz, Isabela, Other
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"Listen to the screams a silent room makes"

Is an amazing poem. I can relate so much to it is not even funny, but that doesn't stop this from being amazingly good. And is true... is so sad when someone you knew so well, cared for so much, is now a stranger.

Trolllollo said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 9:54 am
Trolllollo, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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This was a great poem I can really relate to it...great job!! Keep up the good work :)

on Apr. 23 2010 at 3:45 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Umm only bout a year n a half or so lol wbu?

on Apr. 22 2010 at 11:06 am
Unknown_listener PLATINUM, Lehi, Utah
20 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love me and the world is mine <3
I don't heart you I circle you because circles last forever!
"I can get hearing aids, but you'll always be an idiot !" by: Grandma

thats amazing! how long have you been writing?

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:01 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you very much:)

n ur welcome...I not only write for me but for the reader also;)


on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:00 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u:) Yay, I'm so glad you and your friends enjoyed my poem...make sure to tell em thanx for me;)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:59 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awe thank you! Love ya too!

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:59 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u soooooo much:) I truly appreciate your comment:)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:58 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u:)

I try to be as descriptive as possible I like painting a picture through words:)


on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:55 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you, I really try to put emotion into my poems so I'm glad you felt the true meaning in it:)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:54 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank ya:)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:54 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u:) I appreciate the comment;)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:53 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

thank u:)

I'm a very metaphorical person lol


on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:53 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u:) I'm glad u think it's easy to understand...I hate reading poems that are too fancy and completely impossible to understand lol

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:51 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx:) ya change is sometimes a good thing but in this case it wasn't...

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:51 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u:)

I'm glad u liked it:)


on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:50 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u so much:)

on Apr. 20 2010 at 11:41 am
Unknown_listener PLATINUM, Lehi, Utah
20 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love me and the world is mine <3
I don't heart you I circle you because circles last forever!
"I can get hearing aids, but you'll always be an idiot !" by: Grandma

this was a really good peom. it was strong and inspiring thanks! :)


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