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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.




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Joyful_angel said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 11:35 pm:
i love this poem!!! i can totally relate to it!!!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 11:46 am :
Yay:) I'm glad
I try rly hard to make my poem relatable:)
 
Joyful_angel replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 9:23 pm :
you do a good job with making them relate (: you r truly good with poems
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 1:24 pm :
Thank u:):)
 
Joyful_angel replied...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 5:19 pm :
no problem~ i am here 2 support!!! (:
 
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AlexandraRose<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 9:35 pm:
wow! this is amazing. Its just sobuetaiful, and soo true! keep writing! =D
 
AlexandraRose<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 9:35 pm :
*so beautiful
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 11:46 am :
Awe thank u so much:)
 
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bball_chick24 said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 11:44 pm:
wow!
i love this peom...
i think that it's awesome and anyone can really relate to it!
i am really inspired by it and it's now my favorite!
nice job keep up the great writing!
its all you! :)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 9:31 am :
Wow thank you so much:)
I truly appreciate your comment
thank u again:)
 
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Ashleykimiko said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 6:55 pm:
beautiful sonnet!! great job!!!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 9:30 am :
Thank you so much:))
 
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imaginewhirrledpeas said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 12:03 pm:
I really related to this poem...I have a friend exactly like that....he used to be like a brother to me, sweet and nice and caring. But now he's some tail - chasing jerk according to everyone else.
I just hope that I won't find out the same way that all the other girls did. That they were right.....
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 8:47 am :
Awe I'm sry:(
It rly is the worst when that happens to a friendship but i hope the best for u n ur friend;) maybe he'll realize how he's changed n make it right:)
 
imaginewhirrledpeas replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 5:43 pm :
Well thanks!!(: I hope he does.....you are a brilliant writer!
 
Jacee007 replied...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 1:50 pm :
I agree she's great:)
 
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Summer500 said...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 6:39 pm:
exactly what im going through, you described it perfectly
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 8:48 am :
I'm glad that's what I try to do with my poems:) a poems no good if it's not relatable
 
Summer500 replied...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 4:37 pm :
true that, great writing!
 
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Gina P. said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 8:32 pm:
I really liked this poem because alot of people have related to losing friends that have changed in a certain way. This poem can really relate to me because I have lost many friends too by the way they have changed.
 
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