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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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hollyhottell said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 10:56 am
i really liked this...it was really good. i loved the story it told... you can kinda relate it to summer love...i loved it. u should see if you like my stuff
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 1:06 pm
Thank u:) I love feedback n expesially wen it's good feedback n ofcoarse i"ll def check out ur work;)
 
CheyCheyLLama said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 8:52 am
This piece, I can really relate to. I love it(:
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 1:05 pm
Thanx I'm glad ;D
 
Emokittiy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 3:23 pm
wow this is a great poem. it has happened to me quite a few times. you can relate very well to this. you are an excellent writer
 
tenwords replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 10:04 pm
Wow! I love this! It's simplicity makes it so beautiful. This is definitely a 5 out of 5. Please stop by and check out my work. I would highly appreciate it. Thanks and thanks again for this amazing poem! Keep writing! I'd love to hear more by you.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 1:04 pm
Wow thank you :) what a comliment
I'll def check out some of ur work when I have the chance:) n thank u again!
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 10:59 am
OMG I love it.
 
pfgoldfish13 said...
Feb. 6, 2010 at 8:57 am
This is absolutely amazing! That happened to me a couple of times. =)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 1:02 pm
Thank u so much:)
Sadly it happens too often...
 
DramaQueen106 said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 4:20 pm
Wow.. dis is amazing!=)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 12:12 pm
Wow.. thanx a bunch! lol ;D
 
Jacee007 replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 6:02 pm
Wow...most definitly the right word for this poem! Amazingly wonderful!!!!!!!!
 
annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 8:05 am
This is such a beautiful poem.
It's so raw and honest, and so sad and sweet.
I love it. Keep it up.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 12:11 pm
Thank you so much lol i try to make my poems full of emotion so I'm glad u could feel that:)
 
hotpink13 said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 4:06 pm
i love it it totally aplies to my life right now (:
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 12:10 pm
thanx:)
I'm so glad when my poems r relatable!
I try lol
 
CountryGothic said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 8:19 am
Astounding is an understatement for this, I love it...you better write more poems if this is your skill level.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 11:34 am
Thank you so much that is such a compliment! :)
 
Jacee007 said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 1:49 pm
Wow great poem
Luv it
 
Joyful_angel said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 11:35 pm
i love this poem!!! i can totally relate to it!!!
 
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